Missing Magic

It's five blocks to get to uptown.
Where life no longer lives.
A vacant sea of all run down.
Where yesteryear never forgives.

A world that lives within my soul.
And dreams that now have died.
Forty years can take it's toll.
When failure's all that's tried.

Some may say it's not that bad.
That's just the way it is.
But personally, it is sad.
My downtown's lost it's fizz.

Life has changed so many ways.
And not all of them good.
In my hometown where no one stays.
And I'm the last in the neighborhood.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Makama Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 10:44 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
Thirtyseven Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 9:11 AM
I can relate to this piece, allowing it to pull at my heart even more. Inspired write.
Horne Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 7:52 AM
sad but heartfelt write here, my friend
Squyres Avatar
March 19, 2015 at 11:35 AM
Always sad to me to see a town run down... empty building still seeing through the glasses of yesteryears. Some boarded up from being broken is even more despairing. Melancholy tone to this poem that I feel in my bones...
A   Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 10:42 PM
Nothing is forever Robert, but if you look deep you will see the magic was in you. the imagery is moving. I love everything about this poem... LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 7:58 PM
Hi, Robert. thanks for visiting my abandoned amusement park! I liked your title too!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 6:14 PM
Hi Robert. Yes, I am having a nice weekend. Work again tomorrow. Time just flies.
Horne Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 5:07 PM
sad and powerful write, my friend
Thirtyseven Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 7:20 AM
Wow, not exactly where I thought you were going with that title. But what a good read, sad as it is. Sorry to hear about your old home.
Dietrich Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 9:26 PM
another sad one from your pen. but well written, robert. It's weird to be the last one in a neighborhood. Joe and I may be on that list one day!!!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace