Missing Links

Missing Links This passing year, another one of love and joy with family...some sadness too within our hearts. Good health, accomplishments, rewards we did enjoy. But oh, our golden chain of friendships fell apart. Some links within our golden chain were lost this year; last year had twelve and now are left with only eight. Our chain has weakened as we share each heartfelt tear. Those missing links have made us more aware of fate. Within one year, two gentlemen to heaven went; their widows, still our dearest friends, we now embrace. Another from our group with legs too weak and spent, confined to home, too painful to keep up the pace. And too, her dear companion...twenty years and more, has moved so far away to live with daughter since dementia has now settled in; our hearts are sore to see him leave; we surely miss our gentle prince. So often we spend time together out to eat; our smaller group of golden links still joined with hands. But oh, those empty seats, whenever we do meet, make us aware how just one year can change life's plans. Our chain has weakened as we share each heartfelt tear. But still, eight left, our links hold tight to face next year. Sandra M. Haight ~1st place~ Contest: Second Chance Sponsor: Broken Wings Judged: 03/20/2016 Form: Verse - Rhymed Iambic Hexameter: 12 syllables and 6 feet per line
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Date: 3/21/2016 1:13:00 PM
Hi Sandra, a heartfelt and excellent work. You reach deep within your heart and the deepest emotions do come with your words. It is sad that as we grow older we do become fewer and fewer. This is beautiful in its sadness Sandra. This has to be a seven....Vlad.
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Date: 3/21/2016 5:48:00 PM
Thank you again, Vlad, for your uplifting and supportive comments. Yes...the golden years sometimes are not very 'gold' for sure. I am pleased that you felt the emotion and sense of loss. Thank you again. Sandra
Date: 3/21/2016 1:40:00 AM
A sad and yet wonderful win, congratulations Sandra...
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Date: 3/21/2016 5:49:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie. I appreciate your visit, uplifting comment and congrats. Sandra
Date: 3/20/2016 2:52:00 PM
such a a heartfelt write many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/20/2016 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I always appreciate your visits and supportive comments so much. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/20/2016 11:55:00 AM
I always enjoy your poems Sandra and this bittersweet write is no exception. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/20/2016 6:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rob. So nice of you to stop my with your encouraging comments and congrats! Sandra
Date: 3/20/2016 9:52:00 AM
Sandra, congrats on your well deserved placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/20/2016 6:40:00 PM
Thank you, Laura. I appreciate your visits and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/26/2015 7:54:00 PM
wow, you really went all out with this one, dear Sandra. It's very personal and heartfelt and I love how you used the idea of the links. Stunning work! sorry for your losses.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/26/2015 8:28:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I am pleased that you liked it. Yes, this is the decade, ages 70's to 80's...a lot of changes in health seem to happen, and sometimes, suddenly. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/23/2015 10:14:00 PM
Sandra, this is so beautifully written, a wonderful entry for the contest, a perfect 7 ~
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Date: 12/26/2015 8:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Broken Wings, for your uplifting comment and support with the 7. It is much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/22/2015 7:30:00 PM
This is wonderful and deeply heartfelt! Good luck in the contest! Nicole
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Date: 12/26/2015 8:29:00 PM
Thank you, Nicole, for you visit and uplifting comments. Hugs, Sandra
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