Missing It

While the world unravels
and people turn a blind eye;
Clearly the reasons for despondency
cant be denied.
Thievery and greed, broken hearts
and unrighteous wars;
Has left the world oozing
in unhealable sores.
We think we are leaving our mark
when really its just a stain;
Its no wonder God looks down
on his own creation with disdain.
They say its appointed man once to live
and only once to die;
Then we will clearly see what we look like
mirrored in God's eyes.
Perhaps then we will truly see ourselves
as a creation in disgrace;
And realize when we had the chance
we should have accepted his grace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/16/2012 9:49:00 PM
Hello Carl, wish we could go back and accept... a very good poem... strong point..soup mail.....pd
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Date: 12/13/2012 11:26:00 AM
Patience, is the bomb! I really enjoyed reading it. Good work Carl
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Date: 12/12/2012 12:46:00 PM
I am in complete gratitude that God has prepared a way..Great work..A testimony to your faith..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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Date: 12/11/2012 1:19:00 PM
Thanks for reading my stuff, Carl. I agree. We're missing it, little by little each day and year. Good stuff and good to hear from you. LOve, daver
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Date: 12/11/2012 11:32:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it and love it!!!
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