Mohamed Omar Poet Rhyme

Missing Blue

Words are scattered around.
 Some fly in the sky some lay on the ground.
  I to collect a few.
   Some red, some yellow the rest is blue.
    For some will paint the night . 
     Another will describe the fight. 
      Leaving the blue .
       To mark me missing you. 

22Aug 2021

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Mike Bayles September 28, 2021 at 2:43 PM Good rhyme, Mohammed. Mohamed Omar October 1, 2021 at 3:27 AM Honored by your comment

Mohamed Omar September 20, 2021 at 11:56 AM Thanks sweet poetess . Much honored by your words ,,,

Elaine George September 17, 2021 at 3:57 AM Very heartfelt poem, dear Mohamed.

Deb M September 1, 2021 at 7:48 AM Hi Mohamed, what a lovely sweet poem. Debx Mohamed Omar September 1, 2021 at 9:10 AM Thank Deb,glad you like it .

Hija De La Luna August 29, 2021 at 4:19 AM beautiful words, Omar! glad to have read it :) Mohamed Omar August 29, 2021 at 5:17 AM Honored by your comment . Thanks

Joanna Daniel August 28, 2021 at 1:12 AM Brilliant writing, Mohamed, words as colours, that's great imagination:) Mohamed Omar August 28, 2021 at 3:42 AM Thank you for your critique and taste .I am honored by your words.

Shirley Hawkins August 26, 2021 at 5:44 PM lovely poem, Mohamed. I hope today you are picking up more red and yellow ones and the blues are flying away... Take care ... Shirley Mohamed Omar August 26, 2021 at 11:28 PM Thank you for your supportive words. You are a sweet poetess. I am honored to have you on my page. Love

Darlene De Beaulieu August 25, 2021 at 11:09 AM Hello Mohamed Omer, this poem sounds to me to be romantic. enjoy your day my friend. enjoy your day. Darlene De Beaulieu August 25, 2021 at 3:25 PM Hello Mohamed omer, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your evening my friend. Mohamed Omar August 25, 2021 at 2:23 PM I am glad you liked it . I am honored

Emilia James August 23, 2021 at 9:50 AM A tender and moving poem Mohamed. Emilia : ) Mohamed Omar August 25, 2021 at 2:23 PM Thank you for your sweet taste

Mystic Rose Rose August 22, 2021 at 2:44 PM Ah, this is such a tender poem it goes straight to my heart, dear poet. :) Mohamed Omar August 25, 2021 at 2:24 PM It was out of my heart too .

Sotto Poet August 22, 2021 at 4:32 AM Beautiful poem, I enjoy reading it, thanks for your precious visit and comment on my page. Mohamed Omar August 25, 2021 at 2:24 PM I am so honored to have you on my page .

Victor Buhagiar August 22, 2021 at 2:09 AM You surprise me with the beauty of this poem You did well. Mohamed Omar August 25, 2021 at 2:24 PM Thanks a lot , so sweet of you ;

Panagiota Romios August 22, 2021 at 12:00 AM I am touched by tbe beauty and deli assay of this enchanting Item. Panagiota Thank you