Missing

My muse is missing If you find it please return it to me Sadness fills my world Silent tears I cry I want it back urgently Never giving up hope Give it back to me please Jan Allison 30th July 2014

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Russell Sivey

Date: 7/30/2014 4:41:00 PM

This is surely wonderful, it doesn't sound like you lost your muse by the likes of this awesome poem my friend! But I do know what you mean, when I lose my muse, I lose it...it hides behind the moon and I must write about the moon about seventeen times before it comes back to me! Maybe yours is lost behind a tree? I do hope you find it, I miss your poetry, I'll be back soon enough, school work has kept me captive so I must work on that for the time being! Keep looking, Great Work!!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2014 4:49:00 PM

I actually wrote 3 poems today Russell so my muse is no longer hiding and I am happy again:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Saba Khan

Date: 7/30/2014 12:19:00 PM

Awwww...Cute one Jan ;) :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2014 4:34:00 PM

glad you enjoyed it Saba eye still love your avatar it is beautiful:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/30/2014 8:01:00 AM

I think our muses went out for cocktails, they should come home beligerently drunk any moment now :) cheers

Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2014 4:33:00 PM

Sends Tim a warm jumper and tissues - can't have an outbreak of missing muses it can be fatal if a cure can't be found and QUICK! Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 7/30/2014 8:28:00 AM

*cough cough*.....I think I'm coming down with a missing muse :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2014 8:06:00 AM

Hey Casarah I've had a hug a kiss and now cocktails I must lose my muse more often LOL. Hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 7/30/2014 4:31:00 AM

Your muse is never far away, except at times it likes to tease and play hide & seek; any minute now it will creep from behind and cover your eyes...and guess...an inspirational kiss it will give!! /x/ paul

Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2014 4:36:00 AM

Gosh I'm getting a hug and kiss today must lose my muse more often LOl. Hugs jan xxxx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/30/2014 3:35:00 AM

I holding it hostage for a hug.......lol....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2014 4:03:00 AM

Oh Tim you make me blush.... oh go on then its a deal! Hugs Hugs Hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/30/2014 2:51:00 AM

OH my sweet....if I never where to find IT...I would bring it back! I do miss you....Please hang in there. Love ya! BTW...the muse must not be hiding very well cause this is a superb write.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2014 2:54:00 AM

Aww thanks Eileen for your kind words:-) Hugs jan xxx