Missing

I hate that I can't see you
or hear your gentle song
Life is unfair to me
How do I move on

Can I take the steps without you
Will my tears turn to smiles
Can I run against the winds
or crawl for miles and miles

I hate it when I can't see you
or hear your gentle song
Please life care for me
Then together we can move on
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 18, 2012 at 7:16 PM
Thank you for your kind words... K.
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May 18, 2012 at 7:14 PM
Lovely cadence and rhyming, Michelle... I like the way you repeat the first two lines into the third verse, and your middle verse accentuates the sadness you feel. Well done again! Best wishes, Keith
Mitchell Jr. Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 1:02 PM
Such a heartfelt penning here. A good penning. Surely been there too.
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