Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

Missing

(In Nordic mythology Asgard is a location associated with the God) 

He darkened my skies to make way for the stars said she 
inside her lonely Universe there wasn't any "we"
and the music was low and the storms they did blow 
within scars there were scars, appearing in toe

He hollered from heaven to catch her off guard 
but enclosed in herself she was far from Asgard 
and the thunder did boom and the rain it did fall 
as she begged him to answer her call 

He painted her canvass with black and slate gray 
encased in her soul was a heart made of clay 
He stretched out his hand and healed every cut 
she knew she was found by the feel of her gut 

He darkened her skies for the stars to come out,  
yes he heard every whisper and heard every shout !

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Kelli White October 18, 2023 at 6:09 AM This poem reminds me of the Greek Gods, beautiful, Kelli

Joanna Daniel October 17, 2023 at 5:26 AM Wonderful poem that is so relatable, Vie, beautiful:) a fave:)

Ink Empress October 15, 2023 at 10:08 PM Ive heard of asgard i think, i used to be hooked on vikings. One of my fave series on netflix. Ah your way with rhymes is so stunning and sublime and the flow of your words always so seamless! “ He darkened her skies for the stars to come out, yes he heard every whisper and he heard every shout” this last couplet made me go wow! What a beautiful soulful write this is! Shows that everything even the downs and dark times are for us to find light and see beauty through it all. Powerful write!

Joseph P. DiMino October 15, 2023 at 1:53 PM Very beautiful, Vie; in my opinion, God never sends strife to punish...whatever comes my way is to ultimately uplift myself or others (one in the same) -- excellent poetry, and poignant message. Blessings my friend. Mystic Rose Rose October 15, 2023 at 5:40 PM Glad you enjoyed the poem Joe, have a good evening, thanks for reading

Jan Allison October 15, 2023 at 11:35 AM i feel quite chilled reading your deep dark sonnet Vie:-) hugs Jan xx Mystic Rose Rose October 15, 2023 at 5:40 PM It is a deep one Jan, glad you liked it, have a great evening :)

Silent One October 15, 2023 at 9:14 AM A sonnet my friend.. who cares about meter and iambic blah blah.. this one flows and rhymes very well. seems a little dark and sad also... you have written it very well.. Mystic Rose Rose October 15, 2023 at 5:39 PM it is a bit dark but without night there is no light, thanks for reading my friend :)