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Missing

(In Nordic mythology Asgard is a location associated with the God) 

He darkened my skies to make way for the stars said she 
inside her lonely Universe there wasn't any "we"
and the music was low and the storms they did blow 
within scars there were scars, appearing in toe

He hollered from heaven to catch her off guard 
but enclosed in herself she was far from Asgard 
and the thunder did boom and the rain it did fall 
as she begged him to answer her call 

He painted her canvass with black and slate gray 
encased in her soul was a heart made of clay 
He stretched out his hand and healed every cut 
she knew she was found by the feel of her gut 

He darkened her skies for the stars to come out,  
yes he heard every whisper and heard every shout !

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Kelli White Date: 10/18/2023 6:09:00 AM This poem reminds me of the Greek Gods, beautiful, Kelli Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 10/17/2023 5:26:00 AM Wonderful poem that is so relatable, Vie, beautiful:) a fave:) Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 10/15/2023 10:08:00 PM Ive heard of asgard i think, i used to be hooked on vikings. One of my fave series on netflix. Ah your way with rhymes is so stunning and sublime and the flow of your words always so seamless! “ He darkened her skies for the stars to come out, yes he heard every whisper and he heard every shout” this last couplet made me go wow! What a beautiful soulful write this is! Shows that everything even the downs and dark times are for us to find light and see beauty through it all. Powerful write! Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 10/15/2023 1:53:00 PM Very beautiful, Vie; in my opinion, God never sends strife to punish...whatever comes my way is to ultimately uplift myself or others (one in the same) -- excellent poetry, and poignant message. Blessings my friend. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/15/2023 5:40:00 PM Glad you enjoyed the poem Joe, have a good evening, thanks for reading

Jan Allison Date: 10/15/2023 11:35:00 AM i feel quite chilled reading your deep dark sonnet Vie:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/15/2023 5:40:00 PM It is a deep one Jan, glad you liked it, have a great evening :)

Silent One Date: 10/15/2023 9:14:00 AM A sonnet my friend.. who cares about meter and iambic blah blah.. this one flows and rhymes very well. seems a little dark and sad also... you have written it very well.. Login to Reply Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/15/2023 5:39:00 PM it is a bit dark but without night there is no light, thanks for reading my friend :)