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Her chest heaves in slow-burn motion like pain etched on her clamped spine... and deep into a night sighing death's nearness, brows mark a skull tattooed upon mementos, while lungs attempt to wake frail twilight. The skull resting on her head, does it weep for the finale of a once beguiled life; romancing tracks of her exalted journey ? .................... Dr. Ram Mehta's Missed Poem Frida Kahlo in Free Verse Contest Sponsor: Cyndi Mac Millan by: nette onclaud *Painting: Kahlo's ' Thinking of Dying' --Clinging Unto Grey Fire (poem title) http://www.fridakahlofans.com/paintingsyear05.htm
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A  Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 12:49 PM
congrats in the contest.
A. Sharma Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 12:26 AM
Nette this is wonderful! Congrats on well deserved win !
Horsch Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 11:14 AM
Such a beautiful poem Nette, You write so well. Congrats on your fine win....l..Hugs....Roger
Goswami Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Nice written... " before bones of age and soil melt her fragrance. " it's super....Best wishes from India....
Walker  Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations on the win.... Verlena
Torres Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 7:47 AM
an exceptional write!! ..Congratulations, nette!!! ..=D
Mehta Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 6:19 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in my contest and thanks for the participation, nette
Richards Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 11:31 AM
How can anyone top this portrayal.....you have such a gift, and I cannot wait to listen to you read on Drake's program.. Wow, Nette....this is excellent!
Jordan Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 1:27 PM
Damn but that's good! Jack
Sathasivam Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 5:03 AM
Excellent. Very creative write. Enjoyed. Tfs
Boskovski Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 11:54 PM
What a great opening line... and was a great line to end with Nette!!! Very great poem I loved it!!! from your new fan and fellow poet! Christopher Boskovski :)
Sivey Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 11:00 PM
With your poetry you turn the world into an especially fabulous place, one at which many people love here on this earth! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this illustrious poem this evening! What a spectacular piece, Quite the magnificent poem my friend! Great Work!!
Jones Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 7:33 PM
The whole thing just dances, moves and sings...perfection....
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 2:50 PM
WHAT a great way to portray her. I am sure this must be that famous Mexican artist. Did you ever see the movie about her? She was incredible. I know this poem will do really well in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 12:29 PM
- Thank you ... this is beautiful, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 12:17 PM
The real energy, I see of woman in this wonderful piece. Beautifully done. Loved always, bl
Tacito Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 7:41 AM
Nothing like tasting the sip of a Latin dance...I'm not biased or anything. ;-) This was impeccably delicious & intense.
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