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Miss You

A mass of thoughts cascade upon my chest
each day that night comes
for I hover day by day at your door's step
but I see not your appearance

Flood of thoughts run within my mind
time to time that tic-tock of the clock
goes without a seconds wait
for I hover over emails I send each time
but I see not your reply

Wave of thoughts spill over my sense
I trudge around with heavy head
miss you
Imiss your uplifting words

Autumn leaves heavy with thoughts
for they awaiting your early morning sprinkle
miss you
miss you my lovely friend.

Note: A dedicate to a friend whose her words had for long heard, although I'm to blame. She emailed me then,"therein, I know she wanted to tell me something," but I was ill, I cannot stare at light. therefore I didn't check her mail for some days. Each day by day now I'm confusing...

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Kp Nunez

Date: 12/30/2015 8:22:00 PM

Miss you too... What email? :-))) Kidding! Hi AM. Loved your write... you may have overlooked some but still, a heartfelt write and that's what is important. A fav. hugs!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/22/2015 11:19:00 AM

Dear Afolabi What a sad piece here my friend hopefully you'll hear from her soon, I'll cross my fingers for both of you, but you try and have a Great Christmas, and new years, thanks for stopping by and reading my poem, cheri

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/15/2015 10:12:00 PM

Awe, for a second there I thought the poem was for me. LOL..JK... A sad, poem. I feel you really miss this person a lot. Sending hugs. LINDA

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/16/2015 5:31:00 AM

Yes Linda, I really do miss her. Thanks for the visit I appreciate it.

Michael Tor

Date: 12/8/2015 3:28:00 PM

Heartfelt and Touching Afolabi. Loved this write a 7 my friend, I have missed your writings I have a lot to catch up.

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/12/2015 11:49:00 PM

Yes, that is just it,Time seems to fast a lot these days. Thank you for dropping by.

James Inman

Date: 12/8/2015 11:29:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Afolabi. Very well written with deeply emotional content.

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/12/2015 11:46:00 PM

Thank you my lovely friend.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/7/2015 5:31:00 PM

Dear Afolabi This is a very emotional work here my friend, interesting, and yet troubling, hope she answered you and that her response was as you wished, thanks by the way also for your review on my holiday poetry take care and have a wonderful weekend, cheri

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/12/2015 11:45:00 PM

I appreciate your dropping by Cherl, thanks a lot.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/7/2015 10:23:00 AM

Hi Afolabi, this is written from a worried and troubled heart. Hope you are now feeling better, and do write her an explanatory note; I am sure she will understand. // paul

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/12/2015 11:43:00 PM

Thank you for dropping by, I appreciate it.