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Miss You

A mass of thoughts cascade upon my chest each day that night comes for I hover day by day at your door's step but I see not your appearance Flood of thoughts run within my mind time to time that tic-tock of the clock goes without a seconds wait for I hover over emails I send each time but I see not your reply Wave of thoughts spill over my sense I trudge around with heavy head miss you Imiss your uplifting words Autumn leaves heavy with thoughts for they awaiting your early morning sprinkle miss you miss you my lovely friend. Note: A dedicate to a friend whose her words had for long heard, although I'm to blame. She emailed me then,"therein, I know she wanted to tell me something," but I was ill, I cannot stare at light. therefore I didn't check her mail for some days. Each day by day now I'm confusing...

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Kp Nunez

Date: 12/30/2015 8:22:00 PM

Miss you too... What email? :-))) Kidding! Hi AM. Loved your write... you may have overlooked some but still, a heartfelt write and that's what is important. A fav. hugs!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/22/2015 11:19:00 AM

Dear Afolabi What a sad piece here my friend hopefully you'll hear from her soon, I'll cross my fingers for both of you, but you try and have a Great Christmas, and new years, thanks for stopping by and reading my poem, cheri

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/15/2015 10:12:00 PM

Awe, for a second there I thought the poem was for me. LOL..JK... A sad, poem. I feel you really miss this person a lot. Sending hugs. LINDA

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/16/2015 5:31:00 AM

Yes Linda, I really do miss her. Thanks for the visit I appreciate it.

Michael Tor

Date: 12/8/2015 3:28:00 PM

Heartfelt and Touching Afolabi. Loved this write a 7 my friend, I have missed your writings I have a lot to catch up.

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/12/2015 11:49:00 PM

Yes, that is just it,Time seems to fast a lot these days. Thank you for dropping by.

James Inman

Date: 12/8/2015 11:29:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Afolabi. Very well written with deeply emotional content.

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/12/2015 11:46:00 PM

Thank you my lovely friend.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 12/7/2015 5:31:00 PM

Dear Afolabi This is a very emotional work here my friend, interesting, and yet troubling, hope she answered you and that her response was as you wished, thanks by the way also for your review on my holiday poetry take care and have a wonderful weekend, cheri

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/12/2015 11:45:00 PM

I appreciate your dropping by Cherl, thanks a lot.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/7/2015 10:23:00 AM

Hi Afolabi, this is written from a worried and troubled heart. Hope you are now feeling better, and do write her an explanatory note; I am sure she will understand. // paul

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/12/2015 11:43:00 PM

Thank you for dropping by, I appreciate it.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/7/2015 12:31:00 AM

I hope you are in better health today, this poem it says an eternal emotion we have all felt in such an elegant way, great write!

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/7/2015 12:43:00 AM

Thank you for dropping by Arthur. I'm a lot good now. Thanks for your kindness.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2015 7:23:00 PM

I hope you and she can connect. Sounds like someone you really care for!

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/7/2015 12:34:00 AM

Yes ma, I really do care for her, but all my effort to reach her was futile. Thanks for shopping, you're much appreciated.

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/7/2015 12:32:00 AM

Thank you for dropping by Mystic and for the advice. Stay blessed.

Tim Smith

Date: 12/6/2015 4:34:00 PM

I'm sorry to hear. I haven't been here as much as I like either. Hectic at work and my youngest has been sick.

Tim Smith
Date: 12/7/2015 3:45:00 AM

She is doing better. Going back to school today

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/7/2015 12:30:00 AM

Also sorry to hear that, how is she doing now? Thanks for dropping by.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/6/2015 3:15:00 PM

I can relate to this so much in my life too Afolabi it is hard to know what to do next when someone does not respond:-( hugs Jan xx

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 12/6/2015 3:20:00 PM

Thank you very much Jan for being the first person to comment to this poem. I rarely see you at my page. Thanks!