Joseph Sergi Poet Elegy

Miss You

The time moves so slowly now that we are apart,
 each minute passes with a beat of my heart.
I long for the time that we spent together and wish those moments could last forever.
How I miss you and long for your touch,
 your tender words and thoughtfulness that I loved so much.
As the sun sets and another day is done,
 I know someday we will be as one.
So my love know this to be true,
 only God knows how much I miss you.

JSergi

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Poet Destroyer A December 18, 2013 at 10:58 PM Hi Joseph, ha loving this one all over again. :) Sending smiles.. Congratulations & thanks for supporting my contest. always~ LINDA Joseph Sergi December 19, 2013 at 3:28 PM Thanks so much Linda for the Congrat's It was a great contest.

Poet Destroyer A December 8, 2013 at 8:01 PM Joseph, enjoying this one again.., , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda Joseph Sergi December 9, 2013 at 3:39 PM Linda thank you so much for your kind words. I hope you are well also....Joe

Dr.Ram Mehta December 2, 2013 at 8:40 AM Congrats on the win, Joseph Joseph Sergi December 4, 2013 at 6:26 PM Thank you very much Dr.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2013 at 5:55 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Joseph !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Joseph Sergi December 4, 2013 at 6:27 PM I could not beleve it Anne Lise thanks so much

Cameron Hartley November 27, 2013 at 10:26 AM this one i like :) the last two lines are my favorite. just one thing; you could benefit from punctuation like commas to make meaning more clear As the sun sets and another day is done, I know someday we will be as one. So my love, know this to be true; only God knows how much I miss you. Joseph Sergi December 4, 2013 at 6:28 PM Thank you Cameron for your kind words.

Kj Force November 25, 2013 at 10:48 PM Joseph...loved the way your words flowed... Joseph Sergi December 4, 2013 at 6:28 PM Glad you enjoyed this one KJ thanks so much

Poet Destroyer A November 18, 2013 at 7:45 PM Joseph, your poem is moving.., deep ending... LINDA Joseph Sergi November 19, 2013 at 3:12 PM I thank you very much for you kind words.