Miss You

The time moves so slowly now that we are apart, each minute passes with a beat of my heart. I long for the time that we spent together and wish those moments could last forever. How I miss you and long for your touch, your tender words and thoughtfulness that I loved so much. As the sun sets and another day is done, I know someday we will be as one. So my love know this to be true, only God knows how much I miss you. JSergi

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/18/2013 10:58:00 PM

Hi Joseph, ha loving this one all over again. :) Sending smiles.. Congratulations & thanks for supporting my contest. always~ LINDA

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/19/2013 3:28:00 PM

Thanks so much Linda for the Congrat's It was a great contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/8/2013 8:01:00 PM

Joseph, enjoying this one again.., , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/9/2013 3:39:00 PM

Linda thank you so much for your kind words. I hope you are well also....Joe

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/2/2013 8:40:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Joseph

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/4/2013 6:26:00 PM

Thank you very much Dr.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/2/2013 5:55:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Joseph !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/4/2013 6:27:00 PM

I could not beleve it Anne Lise thanks so much

Cameron Hartley

Date: 11/27/2013 10:26:00 AM

this one i like :) the last two lines are my favorite. just one thing; you could benefit from punctuation like commas to make meaning more clear As the sun sets and another day is done, I know someday we will be as one. So my love, know this to be true; only God knows how much I miss you.

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/4/2013 6:28:00 PM

Thank you Cameron for your kind words.

Kj Force

Date: 11/25/2013 10:48:00 PM

Joseph...loved the way your words flowed...

Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/4/2013 6:28:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed this one KJ thanks so much

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2013 7:45:00 PM

Joseph, your poem is moving.., deep ending... LINDA

Joseph Sergi
Date: 11/19/2013 3:12:00 PM

I thank you very much for you kind words.