Miss You

I don't like it when we're apart I so hate to be alone I know you call me every day But It's not the same on the phone. I hate to sleep here by myself I prefer you next to me For when you're lying next to me I'm not afraid, no need to be. The place feels empty without you A gloomy tomb like space It no longer feels like home It needs your smiling face I know this is just temporary And I'm sure I will endure But absence makes my heart grow fonder So I just miss you all the more.

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Rick Berry

Date: 5/3/2011 12:56:00 AM

Emma, this is very beautiful. Very well written. I want to thank you as well for reading several of my poems and for posting comments. I'm a beginner, have only been writing a few months. So, I appreciate the kind words. Thank You! ~Rick

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 3/10/2011 1:23:00 PM

Very nice poem...good luck in the contest. Jimmy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/10/2011 1:07:00 PM

Lovely expressions on the yearning of desire and love, Emma

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/10/2011 11:36:00 AM

This is very lovely, Emma.It is hard being away from someone you love. Thanks for reading, "Glorious Blossom". I too can't wait to see the array of colors. Your comment is appreciated. Always, Annalise

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 3/10/2011 11:27:00 AM

Hello Emma, This is just lovely, the message is beautiful. Thank you for visiting my space, you left a very nice message.... Lov, Shar