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Miss Understood

I understood that you were lost
on that day that our paths crossed
The clock tick tocked I knew not why
I wanted to talk but the time flew by

Cloaked in invisibility I was your ghost
A unknown guest you were my host
I felt your heart beat in time and space
A growing desire behind a lovely face

A soulful apparition powers to few
I could not reveal the truth to you
Illusion like fog will eventually grow thin
Perhaps you will know the beauty within

One day the right person will take your hand
But the warrior within is yours to command
Everything unfolds this life’s yours to steer
If you want to find strength look in the mirror

Being a passing spirit I can’t offer you much
I’m bound by limitations we can never touch
So when you fall asleep and heavy eyes close
Feel confidence rise from your head to your toes

Those who were not there might never see
the woman within that has the power to be
Strong triumphant beautiful and great 
a miracle a teacher a master of her own fate!


Inspired by Heidi Sands’ poem titled “Misunderstood”

If you read Heidi’s poem first this will have more meaning.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/8/2019 8:23:00 PM
I've read this before and it moved me! As it did again!;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/9/2019 2:03:00 AM
Thanks Brenda, i appreciate you coming back to read it again.
Date: 7/12/2018 12:45:00 PM
This is a lovely poem :)
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:51:00 PM
You spin stories that make one plead for more ...at least within this weary heart :) Stirring dear Rick.
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Date: 7/8/2018 11:21:00 AM
An excellent sincere and uplifting poem, Richard. Love the ending. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/1/2018 10:56:00 PM
Wonderful, just wonderful. A tribute to you, the woman, and the poem! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 7/1/2018 5:40:00 PM
Hi Richard, you always manage to write excellent poetic work, from the first line to the last the reader is swept up on a poetic journey, I always love the content of your work Richard. A gentle song of the heart. Have a wonderful week ahead. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 6/21/2018 12:17:00 PM
Very insightful and personable write, Richard. As pen usual, you ink high poetic quality control. Much depth of thought/simplicity of expression. Love and joy always.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/21/2018 12:28:00 PM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 6/16/2018 10:56:00 AM
I think we all have a miss understood in our lives... I know I do have a few...
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Date: 6/14/2018 2:12:00 PM
Hello Richard, the versers 4,5,6 are the versers that speaks to me. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/14/2018 9:05:00 AM
Thanks again to all of you for visiting and commenting. Sorry my time is so short these days. Blessings to all of you.
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Date: 6/14/2018 7:42:00 AM
a toast to you, rich, for the POTD award... satisfaction guaranteed!..huggs
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Date: 6/12/2018 7:04:00 PM
Obvious choice for POTD, Richard.. you are one of the Master Poets on Soup!
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Date: 6/11/2018 3:01:00 PM
Soul searching poetry, Richard, Rhythm and rhyme, and your awesome touch,,perfect.
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Date: 6/10/2018 6:41:00 PM
It was so nice how you drew inspiration from Heidi. And you ended up getting a POTD to boot! Congrats, Richard. I just love the title word play. And thanks for your contest and my recent placement.
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Date: 6/10/2018 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Gary. Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/10/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Bob!;0)
Date: 6/10/2018 2:52:00 AM
Congratulations on an impressive write Gary, a well deserved POTD....Maria
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/10/2018 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Sabrina!;0)
Date: 6/9/2018 11:09:00 PM
A beautiful write, Richard. Loved it.
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Date: 6/9/2018 9:36:00 PM
Your brilliant poem is certainly a companion to Heidi's. I just read hers and both are superb! Big Congrats on POTD! : )
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Date: 6/9/2018 8:13:00 PM
Wonderful read, Richard, congratulations on POTD... hugs eve
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Date: 6/9/2018 4:53:00 PM
Richard, your uplifting write is a unique and creative piece of beautifully inspired and tenderly expressive poetry. Congratulations on the your wonderful and well deserved POTD honors. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/9/2018 3:00:00 PM
Fantastic! The words and inspiration for the theme of this wring is fantastic. Keep on going. I love it. a Ten Stars.
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Date: 6/9/2018 2:33:00 PM
Brilliant piece Richard well deserved of POTD honors...
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Date: 6/9/2018 2:16:00 PM
A great piece of poetry this is, truly enjoyable and I ll definitely read Heidi s poem, many congratulations on your poem being chosen as POTD
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Date: 6/9/2018 11:08:00 AM
Very well poetically articulated, Richard! Congrats on your POTD! And thank you for your comment on my thousand ships poem.
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Date: 6/9/2018 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved POTD for this beautifully penned poem, Richard. T.J
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