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1/5/16, For the contest, Any Poem, sponsor, Broken Wings

Miss No-It-All

When I asked you out
You quickly said no
How ‘bout a movie
But you wouldn’t go

Can I give you a call
You said there’s no way
Not here, not right now
Nor another day

You say no to this
And no, no to that
So the only thing
I’m sure of is that;

You’re Miss No-it-all

I think you’re pretty
You say no, not true
I ask pretty please
But get, no thank you

You say no to that
And no, no to this
But a simple yes
You will never miss

You say nada, nil
Nothing and no way
Not once nor never
All followed by nay

To visit Pluto
The farthest address
Has a better chance
Of getting a yes;

From Miss No-it-all!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 10:12 PM
David, Congratulations on your winning poem. XOX - LINDA -
Makama Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Wisdom and arts hug as twins in between your lines. A wonderful 7
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 21, 2016 at 9:16 PM
This was fun to read David. Congratulations on your placement!
A  Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 8:54 AM
DAVID, Congrats on your any poem win. ** SKAT **
Inman Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Clever David, nice rhyme.
Williams Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 11:11 PM
Ha ha ha. Very clever and well written. Congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 5:16 PM
made me smile David - there are some women you can never please:-) hugs Jan xx
Gentry Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 4:20 PM
:) I really like this cleverly written rhyme. Smooth, humorous, light. Congratulations on your win! A 7
Yuhas Avatar
January 11, 2016 at 6:37 PM
Enjoyed reading this David, thanks.
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Cute one..She has her mind made up and when a woman has her mind made up you might as well forget it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Legend Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 1:19 AM
ladies and their behaviour
May Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:04 PM
Haha...nice one David...
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