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1st placement

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Nursery rhyme only contest

Eve Roper

10 syllables each line

written 06/08/2024

 

Miss Kitty with tea

a cozy room with a warm cup of tea,
my favourite seat by window to see,
a lazy day with nothing else to do,
isn’t something you would love to do too?

a pair of spectacles for me to look,
how I love the fresh smell of this new book,
mum in the kitchen frying me some treat,
it is fun sometimes to put up my feet!

no way I can play on a rainy day,
summer downpours in the hot month of May,
ground is so soggy we may slip and fall!
so shall stay in and read! not bad at all!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 11:18 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative nursery rhyme. I enjoyed reading this fun write. Have a blessed day/week....................
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 11:26 AM
Thanks Paula! Much obliged!:)
Kendrick Avatar
August 18, 2024 at 10:28 AM
Delightful to see your nursery rhyme on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 7:57 PM
Excellent! You are great with writing for kids! Really enjoyed!
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 7:30 AM
Thanks Mala. something easy for them to read and something that resonates with them.
Jones Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 5:52 PM
Congratulations on your first place win!
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