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Miss July

MISS JULY Vitamin-D shot — Temperate, she’s not! She’s cool and she’s hot. Miss July, her gold complexion shirks shade. Possession of yacht — Lease was a long shot. Time reflects in knots — The noctilucent cloud waves, sunlight sprayed. Buds eternal thought: Untrimmed moon garden sought. At zenith, Vega spots Delphinus the dolphin — East heaven played. 8/2/2019 A Summer's Day Redo Poetry Contest Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner

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Date: 8/30/2019 6:34:00 PM
A magnificent entry Kim, that would be in my top picks! Beautiful! Congratulations on your win. xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2019 6:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie!
Date: 8/30/2019 3:17:00 PM
A technical masterpiece. I don't know how that's even possible in such narrow confines of the contest. Bravo, Kim. And congrats)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2019 4:29:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 8/29/2019 3:24:00 PM
Miss July sounds like one hot lady, Kim, thanks for entering my contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2019 3:26:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle! :)
Date: 8/4/2019 6:20:00 PM
You have made her the center-fold of this heat wave! What a clever minx you are to have thought of this! This is a winner!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/4/2019 9:35:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 8/3/2019 9:57:00 AM
Aw yes, Miss July, the centerfold of the season. Nicely written, Kim, good luck in the contest. John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2019 10:57:00 AM
LOL...the centerfold of the season...sounds like a poet speaking ;) Hugs...Kim

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