Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Miss July

MISS JULY

Vitamin-D shot —
Temperate, she’s not! 
She’s cool and she’s hot.
Miss July, her gold complexion shirks shade.

Possession of yacht —
Lease was a long shot.
Time reflects in knots —
The noctilucent cloud waves, sunlight sprayed.

Buds eternal thought:
Untrimmed moon garden sought.
At zenith, Vega spots
Delphinus the dolphin — East heaven played.

8/2/2019
A Summer's Day Redo Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Michelle Faulkner

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Connie Marcum Wong August 30, 2019 at 6:34 PM A magnificent entry Kim, that would be in my top picks! Beautiful! Congratulations on your win. xxoo Kim Rodrigues August 30, 2019 at 6:36 PM Thank you so much, Connie!

Kurt Ravidas August 30, 2019 at 3:17 PM A technical masterpiece. I don't know how that's even possible in such narrow confines of the contest. Bravo, Kim. And congrats) Kim Rodrigues August 30, 2019 at 4:29 PM Thank you, my friend!

Michelle Faulkner August 29, 2019 at 3:24 PM Miss July sounds like one hot lady, Kim, thanks for entering my contest! Kim Rodrigues August 29, 2019 at 3:26 PM Thank you, Michelle! :)

Caren Krutsinger August 4, 2019 at 6:20 PM You have made her the center-fold of this heat wave! What a clever minx you are to have thought of this! This is a winner! Kim Rodrigues August 4, 2019 at 9:35 PM Thank you, my friend!

John Gondolf August 3, 2019 at 9:57 AM Aw yes, Miss July, the centerfold of the season. Nicely written, Kim, good luck in the contest. John Kim Rodrigues August 3, 2019 at 10:57 AM LOL...the centerfold of the season...sounds like a poet speaking ;) Hugs...Kim