Miss Jane

When we were young and growing through our teens, we've all had our favorite teachers. I've had a few teachers that made the grade. But I must say, there was one woman teacher in particular that was at the top of the podium for me. Because I always kept to myself, she probably had no idea that she was my favorite. I was that curly-haired shy boy who never did his homework on time. That being said, she always passed me with mediocre grades, C's and B's. I never minded those grades, as long as I passed I was cool with that. To me, she could have failed me and she still would have been my favorite. She was always so nice and wonderful. I remember saying to myself " Boy, she reminds me of my own mother...nice, sweet, and kind" Just a lovely woman she was. Well, about ten years ago I had read in the local newspaper that sadly she had passed away at the age of ninety-three. In her obituary they had mentioned her surviving loved ones, those that were proceeded by her, and some of her favorite things she liked in life. One of her surviving daughters mentioned how she loved children and she enjoyed teaching. She had also mentioned that one of her favorite students was a curl-haired boy who never handed in his homework on time. ( In the newspaper she mentioned my name, but I won't reveal it to the judge of this contest). I was shocked to see that, and my grin covered half my face. Although this is a bit sad, I was very happy that the both of us were each others secret favorites.   

happily, I cried 
it touched me deeply...inside 
rest in peace - Miss Jane 


Hey, Write Me A Happy Haibun Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger 
6-21-2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 8/2/2019 2:15:00 PM
Aww, happily I cry with you, dear Charlieku. Your poem is so beautifully moving and inspiring. I can just picture you as a sweet curly-haired shy boy - no wonder you were Miss Jane’s fav. Your touching and intimate reverie is my fav! Congratulations on your excellent win my charming friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/1/2019 3:34:00 PM
So beautiful! To touch each other's hearts! Congratulations on this quite joyous write!
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Date: 7/2/2019 3:18:00 PM
aww such a touching piece Charles I am sure you were delighted she held you secretly in such high esteem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/2/2019 7:16:00 AM
This is gonna really touch the teacher in Caren and she's almost 100% teacher, I think! Sweet and touching, Charles. All the best in the contest and all else ... CayCay
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Date: 6/27/2019 9:32:00 AM
Geat one Charlie. As a retired teacher, this deeply touched me. Panagiota
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Date: 6/26/2019 9:45:00 AM
It's nice to learn she admired you all these years later, a flashback of sweet memories of your childhood years! Nice Haibun :)
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Date: 6/23/2019 12:11:00 PM
It's a sad story... but happy to know that one remains in their teacher's heart as they have remained in theirs. Good luck, :)
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Date: 6/23/2019 9:29:00 AM
What beautiful and inspiring poetry this is...
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Date: 6/23/2019 12:20:00 AM
What a lovely surprise Charlie, it was good to find out that you were each other's favorites. My favorite was my English teacher and poetry was my best part of the lesson. Kindness makes a big impact in a child's life. A great Haibun, good luck in the contest....Maria Hugs
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Date: 6/22/2019 5:44:00 AM
A superb story my curly-haired friend...I had a favorite English teacher, who propelled me into poetry...at the time I hated it...thank you, Mrs. Lynch...sending you love my friend...^WW^...{*J*}
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Date: 6/22/2019 12:04:00 AM
my grade eleven latin teacher was... vavavoooom
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/22/2019 5:31:00 AM
Nice...Sand, thanks for the visit
Date: 6/21/2019 8:23:00 PM
Hello Charles Messina, we all had a favourite teacher. Mine was Mrs. Gowning she was my 3rd grade teacher. Both she and her husband died in an auto accident. I think of her often. have a nice evening my friend.
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/22/2019 5:32:00 AM
Hello Darlene De Beaulieu, that is so sad. Have a nice weekend my friend.
Date: 6/21/2019 2:25:00 PM
ohh, a moving piece, charles.. you made the mark!...huggs
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Charles Messina
Date: 6/22/2019 5:33:00 AM
Aww, thank you so much, Nette :) huggs
Date: 6/21/2019 1:52:00 PM
Lovely memory Charlie, how nice that she remembered you. Good luck. Tom
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