Miss Hiss

I'd rather cuddle with a cobra, And chance its lethal venom Than to fight with female spite- Cause to strike is like such women!

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/30/2013 8:43:00 PM

Very well said! Really like this verse! Always, Laura

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/31/2013 11:19:00 AM

Thank you for the reads and replies, Laura :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 8/30/2013 4:37:00 PM

if you cuddled the cobra and you suffered [black poison] you need the antidote to get out of hell

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/31/2013 11:19:00 AM

I suppose that's one way to put it lol Thanks for stopping by, Liam :)

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/29/2013 11:19:00 PM

do without the D in I'd , it sounds better as for title. . . "serpentine women " comes to mind

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/30/2013 5:51:00 AM

I had debated that actually, and thought that "I'd" sounded a bit more flippant, given the contemptuous tone of the piece, but I definitely see your point. It's worth considering, absolutely. And that's not a bad title suggestion; I'll definitely take that into consideration, also. Thanks for your valued feedback, Danesh :)