Bl Devnath Poet Haiku

Miss Call

loving vibration
                                               media of hand set makes
                                                        communication

                                                   until response there
                                            gives miss call after miss call
                                                      if no reply....ugh



For contest: in show me the Funny

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Harry Horsman July 9, 2013 at 11:48 PM clever poetry is this, and a joy to have read it.....

Anne Rutherford July 8, 2013 at 12:30 PM Glad to see someone else can't miss a call. I'm the same. Good luck with this in the contest. Well written poem. Anne Bl Devnath July 8, 2013 at 12:57 PM Thanks a lot. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen July 8, 2013 at 10:57 AM - You will receive a response ....... not easy to hide away in today's "mobile world" ..... no one go on a fishing trip without mobile phone today .... Well done bl. - Luck in contest !!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath July 8, 2013 at 11:02 AM Many thanks my friend for visiting my page and wishing me good luck with nice comment. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud July 8, 2013 at 10:49 AM i can't usually handle missed calls and this piece gives the theme a sense of urgency... beautifully done, bl.... right on!..;) huggs Bl Devnath July 8, 2013 at 10:52 AM Ha ha ha, firstly smile secondly laugh...ha ha ha, my dear friend. Thanks for early comment. Loved always, bl