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Miss Becca's Return

Rebecca my love is back on the Soup Missed her terribly, my head did droop Longing was fierce My heart felt pierced I'm an eighty year old nincompoop © Jack Ellison 2015

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/11/2015 10:06:00 AM

No one would ever use that descriptor for you Jack. I too am glad that Becca is back.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/10/2015 3:47:00 PM

ha ha ha made me smile:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/10/2015 3:54:00 PM

Don't think John and Tim needed to agree so enthusiastically!!! :( LOL Happy to provide the chuckles dear sister... huggsies, Jacko xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 3/10/2015 1:45:00 PM

I'm with John...what a last line...bravo :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/10/2015 3:00:00 PM

We all get there eventually... didn't think I'd still be so charming and vibrant! LOL Some of us got! Methinks you're a hit with the ladies TOO!

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/10/2015 11:20:00 AM

Lady Cathie is exceedingly happy... And so very crafty... That Rebecca is keeping Jack Happy... She has time to make lunch for her Hubby... While Jack is getting so sappy...

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/10/2015 2:58:00 PM

Got so many ladies that are so good to me... must be my boyish charm!!! LOL xxx

Poesy Relish

Date: 3/10/2015 11:11:00 AM

Nincompoop.... really Jack...¿

Jack Ellison
Date: 3/10/2015 2:56:00 PM

Yah! That's kinda self effacing eh! LOL Anything for a rhyme! Huggsies, Jack xxx