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Miss Becca's Return

Rebecca my love is back on the Soup
Missed her terribly, my head did droop
Longing was fierce
My heart felt pierced
I'm an eighty year old nincompoop

© Jack Ellison 2015

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Richard Lamoureux

March 11, 2015 at 10:06 AM

No one would ever use that descriptor for you Jack. I too am glad that Becca is back.

Jan Allison

March 10, 2015 at 3:47 PM

ha ha ha made me smile:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison

March 10, 2015 at 3:54 PM

Don't think John and Tim needed to agree so enthusiastically!!! :( LOL Happy to provide the chuckles dear sister... huggsies, Jacko xxx

Tim Smith

March 10, 2015 at 1:45 PM

I'm with John...what a last line...bravo :)

Jack Ellison

March 10, 2015 at 3:00 PM

We all get there eventually... didn't think I'd still be so charming and vibrant! LOL Some of us got! Methinks you're a hit with the ladies TOO!

Carol Eastman

March 10, 2015 at 11:20 AM

Lady Cathie is exceedingly happy... And so very crafty... That Rebecca is keeping Jack Happy... She has time to make lunch for her Hubby... While Jack is getting so sappy...

Jack Ellison

March 10, 2015 at 2:58 PM

Got so many ladies that are so good to me... must be my boyish charm!!! LOL xxx