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Just playing around with words...

Dear Miss, conception and function are conceived when connection and direction are treated with correct judgement and perception. So when you go a miss, I'll talk to silence, in the quietness, I guess I'll make sense when I'm silent in pretence. But do you Miss - When I am gone (ing), will I be taken, to understand or understood, or led astray - again. Is it spell or spelt? Or will I be your biggest 'take?' Or have you 'took' it wrong? My heart will lose its 'use' and 'shape.' But when there is nothing spoken miss - who will remain as 'out.' Hope this will be read to inform..

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/19/2023 8:33:00 AM

Stunning poem SO makes one rethink and question oneself very deep too hugs Shadow

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/18/2023 6:05:00 AM

I misread this as a misappropriation of words. But I was mistaken. Sorry, you got me intrigued. A delightful read, my friend.

Silent One
Date: 12/18/2023 1:36:00 PM

So glad you got it.. Thanks Jerry..

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/18/2023 5:25:00 AM

Oh, this is quite an intriguing write with the sense of difference dimension of miss, when perceptions stroll in the meadows of confusion and the seconds feel slipping away in the opportunities that were 'missed' or went out of sight within fleeting moments of misconception and contemplations. An interesting and thought-provoking write this is, Silent One.. Compels the reader to dive in the depths of situations with insight.. Wonderfully crafted!

Silent One
Date: 12/18/2023 1:37:00 PM

It is not that complex to be honest... It is playing around with words that can be added miss or mis.. Thank you for your kind support as always.

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/18/2023 4:20:00 AM

I talk to silence rather frequently! It's a great listener! I definitely miss you when you are on hiatus! A Happy Monday to you!

Silent One
Date: 12/18/2023 1:37:00 PM

Silence is the only thing that actually listens to me.. Sometimes i wonder if I am talking in a foreign language.. thats why I've become the silone one :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/18/2023 3:30:00 AM

Cheers, Silent One. Jocularity this--morning, ah yes it is, I do dislike auto-correct of my using spilt be auto to spilled or split and of spelt as well, an enjoyable read into this fine day... well at least here it is...mayhaps I should look beyond these four walls. Btw, I plan to do your bit on that couplet Anec... and also Lasaad's verse...don't know if you it re annunciation or voicing, well, off I go, again for my grin to this day. Aloha, William

Silent One
Date: 12/18/2023 1:39:00 PM

Mahalo.. This one is actually a play on the word Miss and Mis and use words that can be added to the words... like taken and took would be mistaken and mistook...

Tonye George

Date: 12/17/2023 5:22:00 PM

"But do you miss when I'm gone" definitely, and it's okay to talk to silence when miss is not around, shows loyalty to the core. "I'll talk to silence, in the quietness" this style of talking gives the best result. Lovely written Silent.

Silent One
Date: 12/18/2023 1:39:00 PM

Thanks Tonye..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/17/2023 3:24:00 PM

lol pass me a dictionary dear friend, so I can better understand your diction here, may your talent never go amiss dear friend, Merry Christmas

Silent One
Date: 12/18/2023 4:35:00 AM

This one was playing around with the word miss and mis as many of the words in the poem can have miss or mis before them...thank you and I hope you have a lovely festive season

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/17/2023 2:48:00 PM

your words speak of 'missing out' of not noticing. How often that happens to the best of us. Deep, thought-provoking questions. I enjoyed this read. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Silent One
Date: 12/18/2023 1:39:00 PM

Thank you Sara..

Paul Bell

Date: 12/17/2023 11:04:00 AM

Sometimes the straight line isn't as straight as we perceive. The light at the end of the tunnel actually turns out to be someone else's light.

Silent One
Date: 12/18/2023 1:40:00 PM

Thanks Paul..

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/17/2023 10:34:00 AM

Constantly something novel that will stimulate and motivate minds and spirits. Occasionally, we fail to notice, and occasionally, we are duped. Excellently written Silent One

Silent One
Date: 12/18/2023 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Sotto.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/17/2023 9:32:00 AM

Wonderful writing, as usual. Always something fresh to inspire and stir my heart, my soul. Bless you always, with the love of God, Gina

Silent One
Date: 12/18/2023 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Gina..

Bill Baker

Date: 12/17/2023 9:27:00 AM

I enjoyed your thoughts on words and the way we take them, Silent One. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us through your poetry, my friend. I wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

Silent One
Date: 12/17/2023 9:31:00 AM

Thanks Bill have a great festive season

Joseph May

Date: 12/17/2023 9:15:00 AM

Sometimes we miss out, and sometimes we are mislead, Very nicely penned Silent

Silent One
Date: 12/17/2023 9:30:00 AM

I'm so happy you got it thanks...