Michael J. Falotico Poet Tetractys

Misplaced Thoughts

by Michael J Falotico


                                                          My
                                                       fingers
                                                  are misplaced
                                             and thoughts are lost,
                                 the words are clearer without the music..

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Zzzzz Zzzzz May 12, 2011 at 11:50 AM Interesting write. I get the image of a musician who stops playing, in order to emphasize the lyrics!

Karen Croft May 6, 2011 at 8:39 AM quite interesting, althoug i think better when my fingers are tapping:-)

Zzzzz Zzzzz May 5, 2011 at 12:27 PM Interesting little write. Words are often clearer when presented in stark isolation.

Wilma Neels April 25, 2011 at 9:59 PM Sometimes we need quiet moments to give our thoughts free reign.. Thought provoking write Michael.. Love W ;)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 25, 2011 at 7:57 PM A delightful vision Michael.. talented in both poetry and music u are a true creative artist my friend.. am sure your fingers are far from misplaced as u entertain so many with your beautiful words .. your Jersey Girl in music mode hearing the music of your heart luv..

Wiseton Prins April 25, 2011 at 2:34 PM interesting situation ol'buddy! Hope you find your fingers and replace your thoughts in alignment with your desires! speaking of music, today i've gone back to the eighties for classic some soul! hope you find the right music to appease your gods of creativity to mend your fingers... >Hey M.J, its been long... wish you a nice short week ahead though.

Poet Destroyer A April 25, 2011 at 2:33 PM It might not have a song attached, but I imagine one can make melodies even when one can't concentrate on the creation he is searching for... enjoyed... p.d..