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Miserable Hoping

love wanting to seize you but hesitate your fingers to grasp a hand that has wait sowed wrinkled and worn on still flesh and has lost its youth by hours that were passed on miserable hoping of wanting your return to be granted

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Phillip Sohn

Date: 3/8/2010 5:35:00 PM

Very simple, but meaningful. I like the first 4 lines very much. means a lot to me. Please read/comment my poems.

Dean Masciarelli

Date: 3/8/2010 4:30:00 PM

Hi Jessica this poem is so heart felt and truly sad and I can truly relate to your emotions and your feelings in more ways then I can explain because there is just not enough room to type on every line But I have been where you are and I am still dealing with being on my own after two years now without anyone else being around, but honestly it has given me the opportunity to rediscover myself again. I do hope and pray that things will get better for some day God bless you always Dean.

Date: 3/8/2010 1:17:00 PM

Gripping poem. Much for the reader to think about. Good use of this challenging form. Keep on writing. Karen