Misconception

As the last tear falls from my eyes I saw the real vision or the truth

That everybody was trying to get me to see clearly I felt like my 

Trust was gone and everything was a lie like a real good dream 

Dreams of us having the perfect life but I know it wasn’t real something

That I was trying to touch but wasn’t touchable like air couldn’t feel it 

Like love something that was invisible but hit me hard and ruff felt like a 

Muhammad Ali K.O. punch I couldn’t do anything but fall like I was 

Paralyzed from the neck down and I was the punching bad looking like 

Emmit Till lefted confused with no conception of felling anything

Just wanted to know why??? That was the big question to me why???

A answer that’s all I wanted a answer I couldn’t get but dearly

Wanted one The perfect person in my eyes but in hers I was another 

Nigga another guy cause I thought she was different a new style

New smell new fragrance but it was the same I was a fool in my 

Own game a game that I play for many years and I had lost 

I was defeated and it made me realize what was the 

Real truth that she lefted me she was gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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Date: 5/16/2016 11:59:00 PM
Tomarcus Durham, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/14/2016 2:41:00 PM
TOMARCUS, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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