Mischievous Wind

sun drench in white lace 
for a moment   a daze face
zephyr promenade

the wind decided to play on its way
found its voice releasing its hold to say
whished a while round the ground there
disturbing the old mole's lair  
old mole scowl round and round kicking the clay

a friendly tailwind and a deep breath out, the ground was a blur throughout


1/20/2022


Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Charles Messina
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Messina Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 8:17 PM
Dear Eve, sorry it took so long to comment on this fun write. Nice job combining these forms. Love the poem! My Belated Congrats on your win in my contest. Hugs Charlie
Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 3:48 AM
I have read your winning entry and was delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your place of honor. Way to go. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 12:36 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Mischievous Wind" is a fun write. Have a blessed day.......
Alex Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 5:09 AM
Ground was a blur throughout. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
Proxenos Avatar
January 24, 2022 at 1:09 AM
Indeed a mischievous wind enjoyed the way it played around and with you my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
Dutta Avatar
January 22, 2022 at 11:12 PM
Very Nice All the Best
Andresen Avatar
January 21, 2022 at 4:25 AM
- Not often we have a friendly tailwind, Eve ... full storm several days this week - Lovely written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 21, 2022 at 2:20 AM
The wind has a way of playing around with us. Very well thought out. Best for a win. Hugs.
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