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Mischievous Wind

sun drench in white lace for a moment a daze face zephyr promenade the wind decided to play on its way found its voice releasing its hold to say whished a while round the ground there disturbing the old mole's lair old mole scowl round and round kicking the clay a friendly tailwind and a deep breath out, the ground was a blur throughout 1/20/2022 Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Date: 3/16/2022 8:17:00 PM
Dear Eve, sorry it took so long to comment on this fun write. Nice job combining these forms. Love the poem! My Belated Congrats on your win in my contest. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 3/14/2022 3:48:00 AM
I have read your winning entry and was delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your place of honor. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 3/11/2022 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Mischievous Wind" is a fun write. Have a blessed day.......
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Date: 3/11/2022 5:09:00 AM
Ground was a blur throughout. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/24/2022 1:09:00 AM
Indeed a mischievous wind enjoyed the way it played around and with you my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Date: 1/22/2022 11:12:00 PM
Very Nice All the Best
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Date: 1/21/2022 4:25:00 AM
- Not often we have a friendly tailwind, Eve ... full storm several days this week - Lovely written - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/21/2022 2:20:00 AM
The wind has a way of playing around with us. Very well thought out. Best for a win. Hugs.
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