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rain-clouds hide the sun - - vicars splash the pope and run on to kiss a nun written 16th September for Nina's Mischief contest rhyming haiku

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Date: 1/31/2019 4:35:00 PM
Somehow I had missed this one. Good humor. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/24/2018 9:54:00 AM
Written with a mischievous mind, Jack:) Enjoyed! Regards // paul
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Date: 11/9/2018 4:41:00 PM
You sure got the nuns on the run with this rhyming haiku:-) congrats on your top spot:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/18/2018 8:15:00 PM
Fun again, Jack!
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Date: 10/4/2018 7:06:00 PM
Lots of 'mischief' here, Jack! Very clever, and congrats on your First Place win! Sandra
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Date: 10/4/2018 5:13:00 PM
Jack, this is GREAT--very deserving of the top win! Janice
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Date: 10/4/2018 12:53:00 PM
Congratulations Jack, you have scored the one and only first place in my Mischief contest! I loved this and it was the winner from the minute I read it! I love the way it starts by paying homage to the haiku, then gets into cheeky nuns and vicars! And rhymes! I mean, it couldn’t be more perfect! :-)
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Date: 9/18/2018 11:12:00 AM
Oh...this is creative and definitely mischievous, Jack! I must look up this contest....have been busy of late. Regards, my friend...paul
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Date: 9/16/2018 1:36:00 PM
pleasantly captivated by your 'ku, jack... well done!..huggs
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