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Misapplication of Words

_______Conscious Mind________--- She used her natural beauty to keep him. She often times exerted her power of her attractiveness to get her way. He remarked of how she made him tingle inside. ---------------------------------------- ______Sub-Conscious Mind________ Dim witted and gullible he felt foolish and used unwise and uncertain he asked to take a cruise she smiled and spoke in a clear and strong voice I'd rather have the money money is a better choice he tried to smooth her edges by inviting her to lunch she saw it as seduction and told him to make it brunch but if it's brunch He said nevermind she offered him a dollar for a buss he thought it cute at first than it made he mad well if you just leave than I will be glad male unworthiness and female dishonor He consciously and unconsciously understood her position but his friends warned him that he was in a dangerous position if you interaact and mingle and she show's interest and desire you'll date and couple up and change the script to let you think she knows you The first, the third and the Fifth she'll change the script close your eyes when you dance and midway open up if she's there ya'll are together but if she gone you're alone ____________________________ ____Subconscious mind____________________ he grabbed a string of sausages and put them in a bassoon by thyme we arrive the sausages will be done ______________________________

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Date: 11/14/2023 9:40:00 AM
A buck for a kiss seems like a bargain to me. Interesting poem
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