Mirror,Mirror

Mirror,mirror, on the wall i just want to be pretty, thin,and tall.
Mirror,mirror, if i change my hair maybe someone will start to care?
Mirror,mirror, if i starve my self at least i'll be beautiful forget my health..
Mirror,mirror, if i cut my wrist? will i feel like i exist?
 Mirror,mirror don't you see!!what you show is ruining ME!!! 

  im sorry if this is bad... so dont hate me bc this is my first poem oh this site so yah
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August 19, 2015 at 1:26 PM
Hey! Really good poem! Funny because I posted a Poem called Mirror, Mirror too this morning! Great minds think alike! :)
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