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In another time and age
we could have written a new page
crossing paths on land or sea
brushing cheeks with destiny.
With youthful zest and joy
our ardent quills employ
to mix your ink with mine
with passion so divine
and then the words would flow
to set each heart aglow. 

If our souls could sing and rhyme 
beyond the horizon of time 
to mirror our words with perfection 
with utmost sincerity and affection 
to bring distinct colours and shades 
we seal a bond that will not fade
as we reach for eternity
bathing in blissful affinity. 
Mirrored thoughts on a new page
in another time and age.

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A Paul Callus & Red Fiery collaboration
© 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/28/2016 3:39:00 AM
Dear Paul, An outstanding piece. Nice concept & brilliant lay out..............//:) hugs
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/28/2016 8:43:00 AM
Thank you Manmath; your comments are always heartening. Have a nice weekend. Regards // paul
Date: 5/26/2016 7:43:00 AM
A TRULY AWESOME COLLAB! Such a pleasure to read this morn my friends. A7 Added to my fav list.. thanks
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/26/2016 11:08:00 AM
Thank you for being always so supportive, Robert. Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Regards // paul
Date: 5/19/2016 4:36:00 AM
beautiful images from the mirror. congrats
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/19/2016 8:21:00 AM
Once again, thank you Mohan for the visits you paid me today...much appreciated. ~ All the best. // paul
Date: 5/16/2016 5:03:00 PM
A 7 for sure, Paul. This is excellent. Janice
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/17/2016 12:54:00 PM
Thank you for the 'excellent' comment and the 7 rating, Janice! Regards // paul
Date: 5/14/2016 12:01:00 AM
In another time and age..I always wonder what my life would have been like in the past or future. Lovely poem indeed..Excellent-both of you.
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Date: 5/14/2016 10:10:00 AM
There are moments when we can't help using 'what and if'. Nowadays I mostly think of what's become of people I used to know many years ago! Thank you for the positive comments, Charm! ~ Regards // paul
Date: 5/13/2016 2:27:00 AM
wonderful, soulful collaboration.
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2016 11:24:00 AM
I'm pleased to have you stopping by, Mohan! Thank you for contributing with your lovely remarks! ~ Regards // paul
Date: 5/13/2016 2:07:00 AM
What could have been! ALWAYS a question of Symetry! Love the mirror images and the fun with rhyme back-and-fourth you two! Good one!
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2016 10:48:00 AM
And I love your lovely feedback, Edlynn:) ... you caught on to all the main points! ~ Regards // paul
Date: 5/13/2016 1:21:00 AM
Very, very pleasant to read this. Excellent collaboration and meaningful work.
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2016 10:49:00 AM
Thank you, Mark; your comments are lovely and encouraging. ~ All the best. // paul
Date: 5/13/2016 1:07:00 AM
I am so glad that Paul collaborated with me...!!! Thank you friends for your kind appreciation..This was a wonderful experience ...Hugs to all of you :) Red
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Red Fiery
Date: 5/16/2016 8:41:00 AM
Thank you dearest:)I would love to mix my ink with you again.. And always...hugs Red
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2016 10:45:00 AM
Thank you Red....the pleasure was mine!! Maybe we could repeat the experience one of these days:) Hugs ~~ paul
Date: 5/12/2016 4:55:00 PM
This collaboration is written "with passion so divine!" This is heartfelt! My admiration to you both!
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/13/2016 10:43:00 AM
Your admiration is truly appreciated, Walter!! Thank you. // paul

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