Mirrored Mountains

a mirrored mountain
in lake, filigree ripples
awe in my hearts eye
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 6:05 AM
I can see the scene..Beauty doubled for one can see the actual scene then the mirrored reflection...I am glad that I chose this one to read this A.M. Thanks for stopiing by and commenting on my work...I appreciate you taking your time to do that...Yes, my parents are deceased but not in the accident...Both died just shy of 97 years of age...God gave me a long time to be with them for which I am thankful..
D. Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 11:25 AM
Jayne, love the mirrored mountain of reflections. A poem well written, keep the fascinating poetry coming" luv Nathan D."
Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 8:13 AM
Very lovely, Jayne!
Bagnall Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 5:28 AM
you present a lovely image, enjoyed the read
A   Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 8:29 PM
a lovely haiku Jayne, enjoyed,..P.D.
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 2:45 PM
Nice haiku with good images creating ripples, Jayne
Devonshire Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Beautiful image, Jayne! Nice work. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 12:35 PM
Wow I see it all. Magnificent. You got(have) it going on today Jayne. Love, Carol
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October 13, 2010 at 8:58 AM
I can see it and its just beautiful!
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