Mirrored Lake

swans in pale moonlight
mated pair on mirrored lake...
croaking frogs mayhem




Haiku or Senryu Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Posted on July 23, 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/5/2020 8:15:00 AM
Beautiful scene and sounds...TAH
Login to Reply
Date: 8/2/2020 5:12:00 AM
congrats on your win, Jenna.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/29/2020 4:55:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this wonderful write _Constance
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:52:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/28/2020 12:08:00 PM
Oh I love the magical vibes in your muse Jenna! Congratulations on your win :)
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:52:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/26/2020 10:35:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Jenna.. Congrats on your great win..
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:52:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/26/2020 7:36:00 PM
I like this one a lot, Jenna. So well done. Congrats in the contest.
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:51:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/26/2020 4:10:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:51:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 7/26/2020 3:59:00 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:51:00 PM
Thanks, Jan.
Date: 7/26/2020 11:12:00 AM
- Congratulations, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:51:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 7/26/2020 9:31:00 AM
Back with congrats, Jenna, way to go! Hugs.
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 8/1/2020 3:50:00 PM
Thank you, John.
Date: 7/24/2020 12:06:00 PM
Great juxtaposition. ~ Ribid
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 7/24/2020 1:25:00 PM
Thanks for croaking your compliment my way. :)
Date: 7/24/2020 12:37:00 AM
You take one there, wonderful haiku
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 7/24/2020 11:01:00 AM
How very kind are your sentiments, Harry. Thank you.
Date: 7/23/2020 1:31:00 PM
very beautifully written Jenna! Well done indeed
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 3:06:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Mark!
Date: 7/23/2020 1:30:00 PM
So lovely--good haiku, Jenna. Janice
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 3:06:00 PM
Thanks so much, Janice.
Date: 7/23/2020 12:21:00 PM
Wonderful, romantic imagery, Jenna.
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 3:05:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely remarks, Vijay.
Date: 7/23/2020 11:42:00 AM
- A beautiful picture in your haiku, Jenna :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 11:57:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, and thank you for such kind words. Hugs to you.
Date: 7/23/2020 10:50:00 AM
A mated pair by a mirrored lake in the moonlight, I love this romantic image, Jenna. Good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs, John
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 11:57:00 AM
hmmm...I'll suggest that to the swan. I'm not kissing a croaker.
Gondolf Avatar
John Gondolf
Date: 7/23/2020 11:48:00 AM
Perhaps if you kiss the frog he will turn into a prince...said the frog.
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 11:30:00 AM
It's a very tranquil and romantic scene in my mind, too, John. Then those darn frogs broke the spell. lol Thanks.
Date: 7/23/2020 8:42:00 AM
stunning imagery Jenna i adore swans they are so elegant:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Logan Avatar
Jenna Logan
Date: 7/23/2020 8:59:00 AM
Thank you for the compliments, Jan...hugs
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter