Mirrored Lake

swans in pale moonlight
mated pair on mirrored lake...
croaking frogs mayhem




Haiku or Senryu Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Posted on July 23, 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hill Avatar
August 5, 2020 at 8:15 AM
Beautiful scene and sounds...TAH
Gauthier Avatar
August 2, 2020 at 5:12 AM
congrats on your win, Jenna.
La France Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 4:55 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this wonderful write _Constance
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 3:52 PM
Thank you.
Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 12:08 PM
Oh I love the magical vibes in your muse Jenna! Congratulations on your win :)
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 3:52 PM
Thank you.
Somadas Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 10:35 PM
Wonderful imagery Jenna.. Congrats on your great win..
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 3:52 PM
Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 7:36 PM
I like this one a lot, Jenna. So well done. Congrats in the contest.
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 3:51 PM
Thank you.
Roper Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 3:51 PM
Thank you.
Allison Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 3:59 PM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 3:51 PM
Thanks, Jan.
Andresen Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 11:12 AM
- Congratulations, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 3:51 PM
Thanks so much.
Gondolf Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:31 AM
Back with congrats, Jenna, way to go! Hugs.
Logan Avatar
August 1, 2020 at 3:50 PM
Thank you, John.
Wolf Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 12:06 PM
Great juxtaposition. ~ Ribid
Logan Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 1:25 PM
Thanks for croaking your compliment my way. :)
Horsman Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 12:37 AM
You take one there, wonderful haiku
Logan Avatar
July 24, 2020 at 11:01 AM
How very kind are your sentiments, Harry. Thank you.
Koplin Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 1:31 PM
very beautifully written Jenna! Well done indeed
Logan Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 3:06 PM
Thanks a lot, Mark!
Canerdy Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 1:30 PM
So lovely--good haiku, Jenna. Janice
Logan Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 3:06 PM
Thanks so much, Janice.
Pandit Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 12:21 PM
Wonderful, romantic imagery, Jenna.
Logan Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 3:05 PM
Thanks for your lovely remarks, Vijay.
Andresen Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 11:42 AM
- A beautiful picture in your haiku, Jenna :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 11:57 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, and thank you for such kind words. Hugs to you.
Gondolf Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 10:50 AM
A mated pair by a mirrored lake in the moonlight, I love this romantic image, Jenna. Good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs, John
Logan Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 11:57 AM
hmmm...I'll suggest that to the swan. I'm not kissing a croaker.
Gondolf Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Perhaps if you kiss the frog he will turn into a prince...said the frog.
Logan Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 11:30 AM
It's a very tranquil and romantic scene in my mind, too, John. Then those darn frogs broke the spell. lol Thanks.
Allison Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 8:42 AM
stunning imagery Jenna i adore swans they are so elegant:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
July 23, 2020 at 8:59 AM
Thank you for the compliments, Jan...hugs
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