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Mirrored Cerulean Whisper

deep relentless wet devouring want, cool, inviting, tantalizing

12/29/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 10:34 PM
Wonderful Monoku, Eve - Happy New Year and congratulations on your win, my friend - well-deserved! :-)
Callus Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Belated congratulations on your win, Eve. Like Andrea the results did not show up on my page, now I know why!! This is a lovely descriptive monoku. Hugs // paul
Ashley Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 1:23 PM
Congratulations on your win Eve.. an elegant monoku.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Charged potent words. Well done, Eve. Congrats.
Lawless Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 7:42 AM
AH, the heat of the first phrase cooled by the invitation of the second phrase. Nicely done Eve
Gupta Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 5:39 AM
Tantalizing image and beautiful Monoku, Eve, Congratulations on your happy win ...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 1:07 AM
Congratulations, Eve on you win.
S     Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 5:39 PM
Beautiful monoku Eve!! Congratulations on your placement with this intensely descriptive line!! Best, Judy
Tripp Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 5:08 PM
Congratulations, Eve, on this wonderful write!
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 3:38 PM
OH Eve ,what I meant in my comment was that I did not understand how you knew I had a win. Finally I got straightened out on it. I needed to change the page to 2018!!! Glad I can see all the winners now. And congrats to YOU, dear Aquarius!
Andresen Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 12:55 PM
- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 12:27 PM
Great one liner Eve..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 7:43 PM
awesome picture too!
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Eve, you made me look at contest winner page to see what you meant in your recent comment to me, but the monoku 3 contest does not seem to be judged yet. I really like seeing the entries and to see which element people chose. I went by my astrology element. Did you? I like how you described water here and it makes me wonder if you are a water sign!
Roper Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 8:04 PM
I am an aquarius ,,, My comment was your poem was so good that it should be a petalstal quality.
Ashley Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 8:05 PM
An enchanting and elegant monoku, Eve.
Daniel Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 4:31 AM
Wonderful monoku, Eve:)
Michael Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 3:10 AM
Definitely mirrored in your poem, Eve... All the best to you and yours for 2018
Smith Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 10:06 PM
Excellent Monoku Eve, well done...
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