Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Verse

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FINISH IN TEN Poetry Contest - Verse

Sponsored by : Nette Onclaud

Date: 03-07-2026

 

Mirror -Unbiased Jurist

Standing in front of a mirror
An unbiased jurist of me
Heavy wrinkles on the forehead
Typifying the crossed thresholds
Where did the soft textured hair go?
Turned brittle with the patchy beard
The skin lost glow and grew pallor
Represents the bygone decades
The eyes, still with vitality
Token of the contented life

Place: 3 rd

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Alison A Smith July 3, 2026 at 2:03 AM I like your mirror of judgement. Patri Venkata Ramana July 3, 2026 at 9:54 AM Thank you so much for the compliments.

Valsa George July 2, 2026 at 10:58 PM Beautifully written..... Particularly liked the title. All the Best, dear friend. Patri Venkata Ramana July 3, 2026 at 12:21 AM Thank you so much for the best wishes.