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mirror on the wall

oh wise mirror on the wall please do tell me where did i fall did i love too much did i love too little did i dottle did i diddle i look at me and say in awe how the heck did you get this far there are no regrets well maybe one or two but none to set my brain askew i have lived an exciting life i give all the credit to my wife in all honesty i will have to say what i see reflected is what i am today there is nothing two-faced about me i say it honestly to both friend and foe to me a handshake seals a bond i am serious about this with words i do not fool around i look in the mirror and see an honest fellow the mirror looks back and does not bellow

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Date: 2/24/2014 6:53:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us I love it,Ivy
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Date: 2/18/2014 8:54:00 AM
I really enjoyed this reflective piece of writing. Have a wonderful day!
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Date: 2/14/2014 11:00:00 PM
Happy valentines, Jancarl stopping by enjoying this mirror, hope it does not respond. I like the honest man you see. I now wonder what the man in the mirror sees when looking at you on the outside... xox~ Linda
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Date: 2/11/2014 12:09:00 AM
Very much enjoyed this... really well written... and it flowed wonderfully !! :)
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Date: 2/6/2014 1:42:00 PM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading your creative work today..Sara
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Date: 2/6/2014 11:52:00 AM
- A poem I had not read - a really good poem Jancarl - You have deleted all your poems again ..... why. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/27/2014 2:58:00 PM
your image is your mirror and a fine one at that, jan..nice to read you again; this is impressive and truthful.. huggs
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Date: 1/25/2014 10:51:00 PM
this is very good Jancarl, ........Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/24/2014 10:10:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem. nice reflection. Also Welcome to the soup. May you be inspired here to write many poems and make many poet friends.
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