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Mirror of the Sky

I stare into deep silence The sound of the wind for company The mysterious sky embraces me As I reach up and touch the clouds The soothing blue I inhale And spread myself in the depths of its hue As I look up into the mirror of the sky My kaleidoscopic mind dazzles and flies My infinite moods spread high The clouds catch it and away we fly Dropped off I sit on the side of a cresent moon I hope to catch a shooting star for luck soon. 5.3.2021 Sponsor: Brian Strand All your (March 23) First Place

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/23/2021 10:44:00 AM

Mesmerizing Carol and musings oh so lovely! Congratulations on your win!

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/23/2021 5:58:00 PM

Thanks dear Sam....much love :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/23/2021 6:47:00 AM

A lovely, whimsical write, Carol! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/23/2021 10:06:00 AM

Thanks dear Kim....much love :)

Avery Won

Date: 3/23/2021 5:22:00 AM

Lovely read - great job!

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/23/2021 6:31:00 AM

Thank you Avery....much appreciated :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/21/2021 12:59:00 AM

This is so beautiful! "As I look up into the mirror of the sky My kaleidoscopic mind dazzles and flies My infinite moods spread high The clouds catch it and away we fly" I feel I am looking at the same sky right now.

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/21/2021 3:21:00 AM

See we all look at the same body of sky...though we live hundreds of miles apart....much love :)

Jack Horne

Date: 3/5/2021 12:57:00 PM

lovely write, especially love the last line

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/5/2021 5:31:00 PM

Thanks dear Jack...much appreciated :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/5/2021 7:12:00 AM

Dear Carol, this resonates with me. I often watch the changing colours of the sky at dawn and dusk. Beautifully expressed! Love ~ Mala

Carol Mitra
Date: 3/5/2021 9:33:00 AM

Thanks Mala....much love :)