Mirror of Eternities Glow

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unrhymed tyrcets

Circle of a world one halo shining bright surrounds warm breathless beauty Sweeping warm held inside addiction of need A lion roars taming the beast Heartbeats run wild free and skipping hooked under one bridge of a promise made Colours in sunshine mist bouquet In the end holding preciously hands with you drifting into your golden light Eden capturing to a soul true starlight shines in one out of a million dreams Fountain mirrors glisten From the source sparkling chandeliers light up once happiness enters Charms each morning kissing delight looking into your eyes love Amazing beautiful eclipsing words lost of this earth an angel of grace Arises holding spotlight dazzling visions sings back smiles in your praise

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Joe Maverick

Date: 11/27/2015 2:31:00 PM

Hello Liam.' A while since I've visited you really enjoyed all you display here. 7..'

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/14/2015 6:40:00 AM

Hello Liam Mate!! An outstanding and radiant vision of the majesty and delights of eternity and the reflections that mesmerize and dazzle all of us. Excellent Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/13/2015 7:55:00 PM

Beautiful. I got used to your collabs that I automatically look down at the bottom of Anne's write to see your name there. This is all yours. Enjoy your weekend, Liam.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2015 2:53:00 PM

- Two beautiful poem from you today, my dear friend Liam - Always a pleasure to read - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/13/2015 2:11:00 PM

Hi Liam!A most very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I truly enjoy it! A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy, enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful n' sweet !Magnificent! Just delightful!I love it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding.Just perfect!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Please take good care of yourself always.Keep your faith!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^"