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When I look in the mirror I seem so tired. I'm only twenty eight, but I'm always wired. Seems like life has conspired to make me require to find ways not to be so dire.

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Date: 2/22/2022 12:31:00 PM
Jy is fantasties!
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Date: 4/18/2016 10:05:00 PM
tired, wired, conspired, require and dire. Two successive lines that rhyme make give the Couplet form. If written with two lines rhyming, you've got it> Very nice poem. I enjoyed it. Just look up the meaning of Couplet and read some examples from PoetrySoup Members. Hugs, RP.
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Date: 4/18/2016 10:08:00 PM
Do not give up and put "I don't know" Read poems by Nationality. Many Poets around the world contribute to this site. Cheers.
Date: 1/21/2016 8:00:00 PM
Neil, I know the feeling, hope you find ways of not feeling tired.. awesome SKAT
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