Mirror Mirror

When I look in the mirror
I seem so tired.
I'm only twenty eight,
but I'm always wired.
Seems like life has conspired
to make me require
to find ways not to be so dire.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 22, 2022 at 12:31 PM
Jy is fantasties!
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April 18, 2016 at 10:05 PM
tired, wired, conspired, require and dire. Two successive lines that rhyme make give the Couplet form. If written with two lines rhyming, you've got it> Very nice poem. I enjoyed it. Just look up the meaning of Couplet and read some examples from PoetrySoup Members. Hugs, RP.
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April 18, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Do not give up and put "I don't know" Read poems by Nationality. Many Poets around the world contribute to this site. Cheers.
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January 21, 2016 at 8:00 PM
Neil, I know the feeling, hope you find ways of not feeling tired.. awesome SKAT
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