Daniel Cwiak Poet Sijo

Mirror - Mirror

Old, Broken, Disfigured Bodies, wake to face another day


     Their Helping Hearts, Large with the Compassion of their Afflictions


     Mirror, Mirror, Who is the Fairest of Us All?

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Gert W. Knop May 24, 2010 at 7:36 AM Good question, Dan! Enjoyed reading yor short poem today! Und danke für deine Kommentare! Alles Gute..Gert

Dr.Ram Mehta May 24, 2010 at 3:53 AM This form of poetry quite new to me. I shall refer it. Nice expressions.

Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2010 at 10:01 PM OH, my, not the mirror of my youth , that is for sure! V ery clever, Daniel! And here is an ending rhyme for the last line you wrote: And who of us will be the first to fall (help, I've fallen and I can't get up!!!)