Mirror Lake

The morning sun rose in silence, over the calm lake in red
You were dressed in yellow, your hair long and brown, your eyes dark blue
On a cloud covered day reflections faded, the sun set in black


contest Sijo Strings...Summer Love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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George   Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 6:20 AM
Ah!!! Frederic, What a magniicant picture and feeling you have created with the magniicant Sijo. Many congrats on your win. bfn, Lainie
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 10:06 PM
this is just so beautiful how you laid out the images from morn to night. LOVE it, and glad to finally see it here in the winners' circle. Congrats.
A   Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 11:35 AM
Awesome win ...PD
Mehta Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 5:51 AM
A fine romantic expressions with great imagery, frederic. Congrats on the win
Parker Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 9:23 AM
thank you Dr Ram for your kindness
Chutani Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 2:10 AM
this is beautiful imagery in the lake mirror. Congrats Frederic. Mohan
Parker Avatar
July 3, 2014 at 9:33 AM
thank you Mohan for your kindness
Nance Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 5:56 PM
Great job on your win, a colorfully enhanced poem very nice :)
Parker Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 6:20 PM
thank you Casarah for you kindness
Sietesantos Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Hi Frederic, congratulations on well-deserved great win! The imagery is magnificent! Kindest regards.
Parker Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 6:21 PM
thank you Pandita for your kindness
Guzzi Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 3:18 PM
I seems a dream & so describes the vision one feels they are in when you experience 'lust' at first sight - do try more of this form focusing on the little mind leaps mid-lines & the bigger one to line 3 you sure gave us 1 sensory sijo. Congrad's on your win. Light & love
Parker Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 6:25 PM
thank you Debbie for this contest this sijo form is new to me so it will take me a while to truly grasp it
A. Sharma Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 1:58 PM
Beautiful sijo Frederic ! N concluding line says it all ,, congrats on win !
Parker Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 6:25 PM
thank you Dr Upma for your kindness
Smith Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 1:42 PM
Beautiful painting with the pen, Frederic my friend! Congrats on a great win. Hugs.. Arlene
Parker Avatar
July 2, 2014 at 6:26 PM
thank you Arlene for reading and for your kindness
Callus Avatar
June 6, 2014 at 4:16 AM
Excellent write, Frederic where imagery comes out with full honours! I too am mostly impressed by the 3rd line. gl in contest. // paul
Mehta Avatar
June 2, 2014 at 6:19 AM
Beautiful imagery. i liked the last line, Frederic
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