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Mirrica

not since i saw your face have i saw a face so fine not since then had i wishes for someone to be mine not since then has love entered or left my mind or faded like the others with the passage of time curiosities have waned of things of interest to find there is a steady flow of you going all the time reaching in and refusing to unwind a face with just a little kindness binds beauty with grace i deem so divine if i could place you in my universe my sun would fill you with warmth my moon would light your way through the dark my stars would remind you of God's nature and art the beauty of the constellations would be my creation of feelings as numerous as the stars each shinning in their place in my soul each a feeling for you yet to be told my earth would set you by the sea in the tropics where you'd never leave we'd live like Adam and Eve on a deserted island just you and me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/29/2008 2:16:00 PM
John this is lovely! So romantic and beautiful! I particularly love the 2nd stanza, the part about the stars and constellations. *dreamy sigh* this one's going in my favs. Excellent writing. God bless and Happy New Year! :) Amy
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Date: 12/3/2008 2:17:00 AM
Hi John, finally - I have found t he time to read this. Just beautiful! Thank you for sharing. Love, lainie
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Date: 11/15/2008 6:31:00 PM
Oh my John, this is just to hooooottttt but so beautifully said. I love this poem it is full of emotion and passion and so romantic God Bless Love Phyl
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Date: 11/6/2008 7:27:00 PM
This is a classic, so very well written, such passion and emotion in every line, beautifully and artfully done, God Bless you, df
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Date: 11/2/2008 9:04:00 PM
a great one well said and so beautiful.
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Date: 10/29/2008 6:35:00 PM
A beautiful love song. Could be put to music! ~ :) Carrie
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Date: 10/29/2008 6:04:00 PM
Intense love captured in your loving words. Beautiful poem. Blessings Michael
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Date: 10/29/2008 4:26:00 PM
Wow. Incredible love poem. Such dreamy imagery, tenderly expressed. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/29/2008 3:41:00 PM
John this is absolutely beautiful and so enchanting, I hope that one day someone has a love for me like this, this is really a masterpiece, I will print this out as one of my favorites, I absolutely love this write, it reads like a romance novel, you did your thing on this one, I had to read this again and I am stunned of the depth and the outpouring of feelings in this write, and thanks for your comments, take care D-nyce
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