I wrote a series of these all from the same piece of text.Quite an interesting exercise.
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The bright light, plentiful mirrors seemed more numerous here. Miriam wondered whether music lessons were part of her remuneration. She thought of people, the very first time she had played a duet- a little running melody.. her own part, a page of minims. She heard nothing but her hard loud minims to the end. Someone said she had a nice firm touch The piano should always remember the blue remark- the piano had been unrecognizable, she had learnt her pieces by heart ..alternately the notes, almost soundlessly. At musicale evenings, as winter had sung afresh the effects she could not discover the secret of the notes. Suzanne Delaney Found Poem from Pointed Roofs by Dorothy Miller Richardson
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