Miriam

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I wrote a series of these all from the same piece of text.Quite an interesting exercise.

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The bright light, plentiful mirrors
seemed more numerous here.
Miriam wondered whether music lessons
were part of her remuneration.
She thought of people,
the very first time she had played a duet-
a little running melody.. her own
part,  a page of minims.

She heard nothing but her hard
 loud minims to the end.
Someone said she had a nice firm touch

The piano should always remember the blue remark-
the piano had been unrecognizable,
she had learnt her pieces by heart
..alternately the notes, almost soundlessly.

At musicale evenings,
 as winter had sung afresh the effects
 she could not discover 
the secret of the notes.

Suzanne Delaney

Found Poem
from Pointed Roofs
 by Dorothy Miller Richardson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/26/2018 3:51:00 AM
You seem to be having a ball with these poems. It is good to read others.
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/26/2018 7:13:00 AM
It is interesting, when you have time, go to Erasures register your email and then if you make a poem you like you can email it to yourself. SuZ