David Drowley Poet Free verse

Mirage of Freedom

The rosy mirage of freedom
Is like a scarlet evening light
That paints the clouds with fiery hopes
Which fade in thralldom to the night.
From: Bedouin
Date: 9/17/2019
Poetry Contest: Arbitrium Divisa 4
Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden

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Juliet Ligon December 19, 2019 at 11:02 AM Great imagery! Congrats!

Gregory Richard Barden December 18, 2019 at 5:54 AM Thank you so much for your participation in my contest, David - congratulations on your win! Please forgive the lengthy wait for results. I hope you and yours have a joyous and bountiful holiday season - blessings, my friend! :o)

Na Na December 16, 2019 at 5:08 AM Congrats David on your winning poem