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Mirage of Freedom

The rosy mirage of freedom Is like a scarlet evening light That paints the clouds with fiery hopes Which fade in thralldom to the night. From: Bedouin Date: 9/17/2019 Poetry Contest: Arbitrium Divisa 4 Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden

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Date: 12/19/2019 11:02:00 AM
Great imagery! Congrats!
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Date: 12/18/2019 5:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for your participation in my contest, David - congratulations on your win! Please forgive the lengthy wait for results. I hope you and yours have a joyous and bountiful holiday season - blessings, my friend! :o)
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Date: 12/16/2019 5:08:00 AM
Congrats David on your winning poem
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