Mirage


I know you see me shimmering,
     tantalizingly just in front of you
You got an uncontrollable thirst,
     a rabid thirst for some real truth
Mainstream news drought has you crawling;
     unable to swallow, unable to chew
This news wasteland is a slow, slow killer,
     the tabloid vultures are circling in view

But I'm that cyber oasis,
     that comforting terabyte stop just up ahead
Rest yourself in my modem,
     drink deep from my knowledge well

Never mind that what I'm giving you
     is merely a beautiful virtual mirage
You won't realize until it's too late,
     this haven of hope was only a facade

Your mind thinks it's truth surfing,
     on a cool and intoxicating wifi breeze
But all the while your body's dying,
     thirsting for some real news, not gossip sleaze
Do you think you got enough to make it
     to that info highway a few clicks ahead
Will you chance taking that last podcast gulp,
     and risk being found in the news desert dead

Yes, I'm that cyber oasis,
     that comforting terabyte stop just up ahead
Rest yourself in my modem,
     drink deep from my knowledge well

Never mind that what I'm giving you
     is merely a beautiful virtual mirage
You won't realize until it's too late,
     this would be your final resting lodge

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/22/2016 11:21:00 PM
The way you use metaphors in this poem is outstanding. Beautiful poem.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/23/2016 2:43:00 AM
Ty, Sofia. I appreciate the kind words. Much love to you.
Date: 10/22/2016 3:55:00 AM
A clever, meaningful poem, metaphorically beautiful, Freddie. I hope more will get to read and comment. Have a nice day, Regards // paul
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/23/2016 2:42:00 AM
Ty, Paul. Yeah I just try my best to deliver the messages of truth as was revealed to me by the Spirit of God. I'm just a humble message poet. Love your kind words, my dear friend. Love and peace to you. RW
Date: 10/21/2016 5:17:00 PM
Clever & very insightful poem Freddie! Definitely has a lot of truth in it! P & L~Che
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 10/23/2016 2:38:00 AM
Ty, Cheryl. I am so glad you liked this. I appreciate the kind words. Love you always, sis.
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