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Tansy Roekaerts 12:35 AM (12 hours ago) Mirage With eyes as parched as the desert I travel, I thirst for my loss, yet do not unravel. The sun it scorches with merciless rays, Though heart not skin it brutally flays. My life before me: a vast expanse, Empty and scorched infernal sands. Traveller dropped in foreign terrain, Totally wrecked, blindsided by pain. ‘Not all is lost’, swears false apostle, So now I believe, for relief so colossal Gleams right ahead in sparkling silver, Joy so intense, my tears form a river: Our faces awash, in joy so sublime, I feel such hope, imagining what's mine Returning to me. That long cool sip Shimmers ahead, into relief I'll dip A desire so great. I count the days, Striving to reach that scintillating haze, So full of promise, till deceived I fall - Nature lies too. Still their names I call.

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Date: 8/21/2021 5:37:00 AM
Multiple depths of meaning and some emotions intence and sadness.You have gained some closure on the unresolved in your life .I am getting tremendous therapy here.Yoy are a very precosious poet and you are fluent with rare elegance in writing style composition.Your going to be famous.I will do all I can to make you famous for your poetry and all that you are
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Date: 2/24/2021 3:54:00 AM
Very expressive and descriptive winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Tansy Roekaerts
Date: 2/27/2021 4:54:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/21/2021 6:59:00 AM
Tansy, you have written a lovely dreamy poem and congrats on your win _Constance
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Date: 2/22/2021 8:49:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words and letting me know I'd won

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