Mirage

Tansy Roekaerts
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Mirage

With eyes as parched as the desert I travel,
I thirst for my loss, yet do not unravel.
The sun it scorches with merciless rays,
Though heart not skin it brutally flays.

My life before me: a vast expanse,
Empty and scorched infernal sands.
Traveller dropped in foreign terrain,
Totally wrecked, blindsided by pain.


‘Not all is lost’, swears false apostle,
So now I believe, for relief so colossal
Gleams right ahead in sparkling silver,
Joy so intense, my tears form a river:

Our faces awash, in joy so sublime,
I feel such hope, imagining what's mine
Returning to me. That long cool sip
Shimmers ahead, into relief I'll dip

A desire so great. I count the days,
Striving to reach that scintillating haze,
So full of promise, till deceived I fall -
Nature lies too. Still their names I call.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/21/2021 5:37:00 AM
Multiple depths of meaning and some emotions intence and sadness.You have gained some closure on the unresolved in your life .I am getting tremendous therapy here.Yoy are a very precosious poet and you are fluent with rare elegance in writing style composition.Your going to be famous.I will do all I can to make you famous for your poetry and all that you are
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Date: 2/24/2021 3:54:00 AM
Very expressive and descriptive winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Tansy Roekaerts
Date: 2/27/2021 4:54:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/21/2021 6:59:00 AM
Tansy, you have written a lovely dreamy poem and congrats on your win _Constance
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Date: 2/22/2021 8:49:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words and letting me know I'd won
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