Mirage
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Listen to poem:
a liquefied desert,
betrays an obscure view that taunts,
of palm date trees where water flows,
as its haunts, yet camels,
drags me far against envy's wants
LIND68868
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(Thought it a try, being my first at it, I like the flow of its style)
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