William Kelii Kekaula Poet Free verse

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Mirage

a liquefied desert,

betrays an obscure view that taunts,

of palm date trees where water flows,

as its haunts, yet camels,

drags me far against envy's wants




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Caren Krutsinger May 15, 2019 at 1:32 AM The camel knows; always take the camel's advice. Smile. William Kelii Kekaula May 15, 2019 at 2:45 AM Yes, the nose knows, right on Caren, Aloha wk

Andrea Dietrich May 14, 2019 at 12:31 PM Yes, that would be a horrible thing, to be in a desert and feeling such hope when it all turns out to be only a mirage! William Kelii Kekaula May 14, 2019 at 12:44 PM Cruel, and now horrible, for they both portray the poor dehydrated ravenous soul whose saviour is his trusty camel, appreciate it Andrea, Aloha wk

Kim Rodrigues May 14, 2019 at 5:49 AM Cruel...the mirage...unless help’s on the way! Enjoyed! William Kelii Kekaula May 14, 2019 at 6:13 AM Thank you kindly Kim, Aloha wk