Miracles Within

female bird on nest
miracles within her eggs -
chicks take their first breath

Written 15th March 2019

Contest: Writing Challenge 2, March 2019
Sponsor: Dear Heart
2nd place

Contest BRIAN STRAND 2 ~ 14 LINES POETRY
Sponsor Brian Strand
FIRST PLACE
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Alex Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 7:10 PM
Beautiful Haiku Chain. Congratulations on your Win!
Gilmour Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 6:53 PM
Bless you dear Christuraj for your lovely comments. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 8:56 AM
A wonderful HAIKU
Gilmour Avatar
March 26, 2019 at 2:04 PM
Thank you so much Allen for your lovely comment and so nice to meet you. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
La France Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 11:02 AM
Ann, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful haiku ~
Gilmour Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 2:21 PM
Thank you so much Dear Heart for my 2nd place in your contest and your lovely comments. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 7:14 PM
what a sweet haiku Ann:-) hugs jan xx
Gilmour Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Many thanks Jan, glad you liked it. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Roper Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 6:50 PM
Great Haiku,Ann, congratulations on your win. Happy Saint Patrick’s Day. Hugs Eve ~`*
Gilmour Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 6:59 PM
Thank you so much Eve for your congrats and hugs, today would have been my darling's 75th birthday, so a special day for me and I wrote a poem to celebrate it. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 6:31 PM
the cutest nature miracles of spring! Congrats on your win
Gilmour Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 6:42 PM
Yes Mother Nature never ceases to amaze and delight me Andrea, thank you so much for your congrats. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 3:11 PM
- A new life ... nature's miracles ... lovely written, Ann :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gilmour Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 3:19 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise I agree a new life is always a miracle... Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Y. Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 6:09 PM
Hi Ann, You painted such a beautiful scene with words. I could just picture it in my head, as the little chicks their first breath. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Gilmour Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 8:26 PM
Many thanks for your lovely comments Alexis I really appreciate them. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Sands Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 2:09 PM
I can see this. Sweet! :)
Gilmour Avatar
March 15, 2019 at 2:36 PM
Thank you Heidi, last year I watched two black winged gulls nurturing 3 of the sweetest chicks and the first day I saw them after hatching was such a treat. Sadly one was taken, but I continued to watch each day until finally they fledged - such a wonderful sight! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
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