Miracles

MIRACLES What’s next On the long list of miracles? Talk of ‘thin air’ (He seemed to vanish into thin air) Yes! But is the air really thin? It seems from past discoveries the air is loaded loaded with particles not even the strongest lenses might detect A few –a gifted few - have looked into this thickness discovered the miraculous Yes! They looked beyond brought a togetherness Now perhaps others somehow will look Beyond beyond unto a point visited only by greatest prophets a point beyond form or substance surrounded only by light a point where no sun is needed where everything is possible nothing but miracles a SINGLE point of existence Beyond beyond beyond beyond ………….. T

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Michael Smith

Date: 5/1/2012 7:33:00 PM

Interesting piece. I reads this because my wife's name is Milagros (Miracles).

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2011 8:19:00 PM

This is deep deep deep. Wow, how did I ever miss it here? Not posted long ago either. I love how you think, Daver!

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/17/2011 7:54:00 AM

Hey Daver! A very profound write! Those elusive and ethereal particles, the essence of hope and miracles? Surely a "substance surrounded only by light". They can be caught on the breath of one such as you! Best wishes to you and yours, Love Mikki

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/16/2011 2:12:00 PM

With the way society is headed, we will need those miracles to stay in existence. Just thought I'd drop in and visit an old friend. Vince

James Foulk

Date: 6/15/2011 8:32:00 PM

thank you for commenting on mr robin pays a visit. it sounds like you use to live in Denver, that is where i live now. Saginaw use to have a minor hockey league team that played my home town of Des Moines Iowa back in the late 60's and early 70's. and a great song Saginaw Mich. by lefty Friizel.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/13/2011 11:23:00 AM

I believe that it is there beyond..Looking forward to witnessing it in person..Enjoyed reading your creative work today...My work "Sealed With A Bilberry Kiss" was based on the picture for the contest, a painting called "The Lily Pond",my emotions, memories, use of rhyming dictionary, dictionary,and my imagination..Thanks for stopping by and leaving the uplifting comment..Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 6/13/2011 11:13:00 AM

So poetic my dear friend, and yet, the philosophical attempt enhances this write, yep, you'll have me searching all day for the poundage of nothingness ! (air) ! Have a great week dear poet ! Much love, james

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/13/2011 8:00:00 AM

talking of transcendence, your words fly, daver... amazing! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/12/2011 3:50:00 PM

wonderful extension of looking into the beyond Daver with the air as premise and the eloquent lines explaining it away... a delightful yet thought provoking read my friend... outside checking air..quality luv.. oh..

Date: 6/12/2011 11:58:00 AM

Thought provoking piece. Thank you for sharing it with us. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2011 10:40:00 AM

Those who manage to reach "beyond" their "point of existence" are the lucky few who manage to tap into the universal consciousness. A dream this would be for me, but I do believe Edgar Cayce is among those who mastered this art. I imagine the air is filled with pollution and it would take a miracle to rise above it. Maybe on the Starship Enterprise. (I don't do well with "love" poems, Daver, but wanted to support Francine's contest.) Love, Carolyn

James Foulk

Date: 6/12/2011 10:06:00 AM

enjoyed this creative and well written poem, thank you for commenting on Caressing White Clouds.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 6/12/2011 9:26:00 AM

Nikko has covered it all here... WOw amazing poetry my friend... nothing short of great....Michael

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/12/2011 9:22:00 AM

oh wow, Dave! this is just an awesome read-- it truly is amazing how something so minute can actually be as you say it be the "single point of existence"-- there is just soo much wonder here, well beyond our imaginations actually, and Most definitely miracles in their own rights!-- Super enjoyed the thoughts you put in here!