Miracle Workers

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In the dank, dreary domain of leeches bloodsuckers swim willy-nilly, hither and thither in the murk. Aquatic bloodhounds sniffing the water, they zero in on lunch, a warm barefoot or a leg will do just fine. Like vampire bats, they numb their bite, so it's painless. Both the stuff of nightmares and a prayer come true, you mustn't judge them harshly; they're most beneficial. Why else would nature create such a parasitic creature? No one relishes the task when I ask for volunteers to catch wild leeches; they all have feet of lead as I lead them to the pond. My colleagues refer to them as squirming syringes. And yet, these lowly critters are miracle workers once you get past their slimy feel and swamp smell. It takes but a second for their minute teeth to cut into bruised flesh helping to restore blood circulation. (Free Verse) Aug. 15, 2018

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Date: 9/14/2018 5:35:00 AM
wow amazing! congrats dear Emile! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/14/2018 7:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Luloo, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/13/2018 2:38:00 PM
Congrats on doing a superb job with the devices, Emile. A most educational topic!
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Date: 9/13/2018 3:35:00 PM
Thank you Line, I enjoyed the challenge my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/13/2018 1:47:00 PM
Though I wasn't too keen to revisit the gruesome picture, the poem certainly deserved another viewing! A very clever intermingling of the devices into a cohesive whole Émile. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/13/2018 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Wendy, I always appreciate a visit from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/26/2018 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your $1 win with this informative and gross litany of literary devices. Well done. SoupMail.
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Date: 8/26/2018 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate all your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/23/2018 9:39:00 PM
Congrats Emile to win on your wonderful poem. Warm wishes.
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Date: 8/24/2018 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Anisha, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/23/2018 7:09:00 PM
Informative and creepy yet they have purpose. Great write and congrats, Emile!
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Date: 8/23/2018 7:30:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/23/2018 5:11:00 PM
congrats on a great poem - didn't realise the poetic forms was so smoothly done.
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Date: 8/23/2018 6:00:00 PM
Thanks Virginia, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/23/2018 4:50:00 PM
Yes, God did create them for a reason. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 8/23/2018 6:00:00 PM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/23/2018 1:00:00 PM
Wow Emile, I never knew this about leeches! Congratulations on your win :)x
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Date: 8/23/2018 5:59:00 PM
Thanks Francesca, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/23/2018 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations Emile...
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Date: 8/23/2018 12:23:00 PM
Thanks Charlie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/23/2018 8:09:00 AM
What a poetic feat! Congratulations on your win too, Émile. ( leeches)
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Date: 8/23/2018 11:59:00 AM
Thanks Wendy, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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