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Miracle Workers

In the dank, dreary domain of leeches bloodsuckers swim willy-nilly, hither and thither in the murk. Aquatic bloodhounds sniffing the water, they zero in on lunch, a warm barefoot or a leg will do just fine. Like vampire bats, they numb their bite, so it's painless. Both the stuff of nightmares and a prayer come true, you mustn't judge them harshly; they're most beneficial. Why else would nature create such a parasitic creature? No one relishes the task when I ask for volunteers to catch wild leeches; they all have feet of lead as I lead them to the pond. My colleagues refer to them as squirming syringes. And yet, these lowly critters are miracle workers once you get past their slimy feel and swamp smell. It takes but a second for their minute teeth to cut into bruised flesh helping to restore blood circulation. (Free Verse) Aug. 15, 2018
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Scars Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 5:35 AM
wow amazing! congrats dear Emile! :)-luloo
Pinet Avatar
September 14, 2018 at 7:17 AM
Thank you so much Luloo, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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September 13, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Congrats on doing a superb job with the devices, Emile. A most educational topic!
Pinet Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Thank you Line, I enjoyed the challenge my friend, Emile.
Watson Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 1:47 PM
Though I wasn't too keen to revisit the gruesome picture, the poem certainly deserved another viewing! A very clever intermingling of the devices into a cohesive whole Émile. Congratulations on your win.
Pinet Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Thanks Wendy, I always appreciate a visit from you my friend, Emile.
Gentry Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations on your $1 win with this informative and gross litany of literary devices. Well done. SoupMail.
Pinet Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 1:35 PM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate all your support my friend, Emile.
Dutta Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 9:39 PM
Congrats Emile to win on your wonderful poem. Warm wishes.
Pinet Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 7:40 AM
Thanks Anisha, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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August 23, 2018 at 7:09 PM
Informative and creepy yet they have purpose. Great write and congrats, Emile!
Pinet Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Waters Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 5:11 PM
congrats on a great poem - didn't realise the poetic forms was so smoothly done.
Pinet Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Thanks Virginia, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Canerdy Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 4:50 PM
Yes, God did create them for a reason. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Pinet Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Pappadogiannis Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 1:00 PM
Wow Emile, I never knew this about leeches! Congratulations on your win :)x
Pinet Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 5:59 PM
Thanks Francesca, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Smith Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 12:05 PM
Congratulations Emile...
Pinet Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 12:23 PM
Thanks Charlie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Watson Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 8:09 AM
What a poetic feat! Congratulations on your win too, Émile. ( leeches)
Pinet Avatar
August 23, 2018 at 11:59 AM
Thanks Wendy, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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