Miracle of Life

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I'm drawing plans for a fictional realm,  Insightful brinks and a sacrifice-themed helm.  Smoothness clings to a grip, then rots away, Her ruby eyes are shadowed by a torn sky. Cold, harsh hands of time cement reality,  Consider a wild parallel to true vitality.  I spot your inner vibe and your groove, Wait for them until we are told to move. Ardor pulls me and ousts me at the sight, aired hands-held dirty web shreds on site.  Are you going to cry away your worry? Repair the shattered pieces of my fury. Bind our beating souls jointly raising affection, Yield the cosmos a color-flowing connection.  Bind me to draw with you as we recite our tale, Configure the skeleton with a quatrain trail. Throw pain and swab it away from raw flesh, From our throat, write thoughts left fresh. A writer with omniscience named fate rosery, Ink filled our souls till we were bleeding poetry. Draft a proud ending and infuse it into capacity, Sitting on the side of the soul rapt in creativity.
Written: October 06, 2022

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Date: 10/6/2022 11:17:00 PM
I love dark poems. I used to write many of them. Yours is fabulously dark.
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Date: 10/6/2022 5:07:00 PM
This Poem's dark side narrated and created in explanation by the writer is magnificently done Lasaad. The darkness of your creation is perfectly put together to convey. I like the twist in this from the writer you...
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Date: 10/6/2022 3:00:00 PM
A beautifully written piece of dark poetry Lasaad, certainly one to read over and over again, and you raise the bar once more, a professional narrator could do wonders with this work, a poets poem for sure, cheers David
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