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Minute Strands of Joy

I watch as life starts to leave me behind Each day unfolds its neverending glory, little by little youth is another creature ravenous its hunger consumes everything The minute joys encapsulated in each day should be savoured taken in small bites and rolled around your mouth Life is passing me by but I sit here holding ribbons of life stroking them through my hands each beautiful strand Is a moment of joy ....

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2013 1:09:00 PM

Jayne, i'm glad to know you find it a blessing in life's beautiful strand. It is a nice feeling, and image... I never have the time to stroke my hands through the strands of life.. I guess I am a sad case, and life is passing me by... I love this poem.. it meant a lot to me....always~ Linda

Jayne Eggins
Date: 4/19/2013 6:45:00 AM

Thank you so much I am very happy that you connected to this poem I appreciate the visit love Jayne x

Tim Ryerson

Date: 4/12/2013 4:36:00 AM

I am your newest fan...

Jayne Eggins
Date: 4/12/2013 5:05:00 AM

you made me blush ! thanks for the comment and making my night love Jayne

Ephraim Crud

Date: 4/10/2013 1:16:00 PM

now here's a moment of joy..... whoop-whoop! an excellent write, as ever, J-C, and how good to see you here! catch yerz later, crocogator! xxx eph

Jayne Eggins
Date: 4/11/2013 4:25:00 AM

Well I declare ello Ephy nice to know your here I will get round and have a read of you now I know, glad you enjoyed my poem :) love and hugs JC xx

Pratheeksha Payyanur

Date: 4/1/2013 12:07:00 AM

really an excellent poem which is filled with positive energy.the glorious beginning that tells of the stand you take watching each moment of life,and the final stanza that adds extra charm to your writing,holding ribbons of life,stroking each beautiful strand.....a moment of joy....a beautiful imagery unfolds like a flower blooms

Jayne Eggins
Date: 4/1/2013 2:35:00 AM

I am very glad you took the time to read this one and I want to thank you for the beautiful comment love Jayne