Minus Identity Who Am I?

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I am that kid who grew up in public school that kid who usually followed most rules. I am the kid who was bullied by many had a few friends, but really not any. I am the one who will shop your Instacart order and yet ware my feelings on my shoulder. I am the bus monitor on a special needs bus I interact with the children so they don't fuss. I am the woman with a wonderful man he is the start and finish of what I am. I am a Princess a Child of Jesus The King Jesus Christ is Lord of my life and my everything.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2024 1:25:00 PM

This is very nice, Miranda. Were you really bullied? So sad if you were. I recall two different boys who chased me home from school in grade school calling me names and holding spiders and stuff. I really hated those two guys!

Miranda Hawley
Date: 8/2/2024 1:35:00 PM

Yes, I was bullied by many kids in my school growing up. Ironically I knew where the three people that bullied me the most lived. My absolute biggest nemesis lived a few houses down across the street, the 2nd bully lived in the house that directly managed the trailer park granny and gramps lived in, and the 3rd one less than a block away from my house. There were others. That was grade school, then there were more bullies in Middle and High School.

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/10/2024 10:09:00 PM

Wow! Thanks for sharing this, exposing who you are in your excellent poetic way. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently judged contest. God bless you.

Miranda Hawley
Date: 7/11/2024 6:19:00 PM

Glad you like this and you're welcome.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/29/2024 1:13:00 AM

this one delights my spirit, miranda...you are certainly beloved by Christ.

Miranda Hawley
Date: 6/29/2024 4:43:00 AM

Thank you so much!

Karen Jones

Date: 6/29/2024 12:31:00 AM

Very creative! I like!

Miranda Hawley
Date: 6/29/2024 4:43:00 AM

Thank you so much for that.