Notes About The Poem

Minus Identity Who Am I?

I am that kid who grew up in public school
that kid who usually followed most rules.

I am the kid who was bullied by many
had a few friends, but really not any.

I am the one who will shop your Instacart order 
and yet ware my feelings on my shoulder.

I am the bus monitor on a special needs bus
I interact with the children so they don't fuss.

I am the woman with a wonderful man
he is the start and finish of what I am.

I am a Princess a Child of Jesus The King 
Jesus Christ is Lord of my life and my everything.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 1:25 PM
This is very nice, Miranda. Were you really bullied? So sad if you were. I recall two different boys who chased me home from school in grade school calling me names and holding spiders and stuff. I really hated those two guys!
Hawley Avatar
August 2, 2024 at 1:35 PM
Yes, I was bullied by many kids in my school growing up. Ironically I knew where the three people that bullied me the most lived. My absolute biggest nemesis lived a few houses down across the street, the 2nd bully lived in the house that directly managed the trailer park granny and gramps lived in, and the 3rd one less than a block away from my house. There were others. That was grade school, then there were more bullies in Middle and High School.
Agustin Avatar
July 10, 2024 at 10:09 PM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this, exposing who you are in your excellent poetic way. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently judged contest. God bless you.
Hawley Avatar
July 11, 2024 at 6:19 PM
Glad you like this and you're welcome.
Onclaud Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 1:13 AM
this one delights my spirit, miranda...you are certainly beloved by Christ.
Hawley Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 4:43 AM
Thank you so much!
Jones Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 12:31 AM
Very creative! I like!
Hawley Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 4:43 AM
Thank you so much for that.
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